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| Reviews for Granddaughter to the Lioness |
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   LovingFanFiction 5/2/13 . chapter 3love the little funfunfun at the end! and all the recognizable names! |
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 35 orange cats have a genetic defect. no female/only male .i have females are only partaly orange |
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 31 yes title matches, in Rye's case . he got kissed |
| Guest 8/18/12 . chapter 28 the grasshopper trick works. |
| ShadowMoonDancer 7/10/12 . chapter 37 I loved this story, it had me laughing so hard, or giggling depending on the situation, at times that my suitemate had to come check on and make sure I wan't having some sort of attack. This usually shows that the story is very good. I'm hoping you have gotten a good bit into your next one because much like your character I get impatient about things like this. |
| HI 6/7/12 . chapter 38 i loved this story! |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 37 I loved this story! I added it to my favourites! best story ever! Can't wait to read the next one! |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 11 loved this chapter! |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 9 How did she not hear them coming? you said she was kept up by the RAIN! POOR ADY! I liked this chapter, some action at last! Not that the teasing wasn't fun, it |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 8 loved it! hope there isn't any gooey romance ) a bit is okay, but gooey, eww. XD |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 3 lol. I love the chatter. |
| Blown 1/29/11 . chapter 1 AMAZING! Just a suggestion, you could make your dialogue a bit smoother. When real people talk, they rarely talk in full words and sentences with perfect grammar. They slur things together and say "I'm" instead of I am, and "I'll" instead of I will. Your grammar is great (thank god) but you can be a bit loose when writing dialogue. It makes the characters more believeable, and realistic. Just read any Tamora Pierce book, and you'll realize she did it too! |
| faults 12/10/10 . chapter 38 I LOVE THIS STORY! - (At a later point: I apologise for the creepy shrieking) I have got one thing to say, which is that this is my favourite TP fanfic of all time - and I am confident it will stay this way. Wooh! Sorry can't stay long enough to write legible review! Bahahvwjkefgwqui;ugW Cheerio! P.S. (Aussie pride! (oh, the woes of being patriotic)) |
| faults 12/10/10 . chapter 3 Okay, first time I've reviewed so early in a story for aaggees! You are amazing so far, which is why I'm adding this to my favourites now! (I've been laughing my head of!) Wooh! Stop exclamation marking! Ah well, will review later. :D |
| Aria657 9/1/10 . chapter 38 I love Ady! She is one of the most amazing people ever! |
