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| Kane Shi Megami 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuselol, last line was the best line ever. :) KSM |
| MithLuin 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoL, yes, romance does get in the way of serious academic studies! This was cute. I do wonder if the person who was 'the youngest State Alchemist ever' before Ed...was Roy. It seems to fit. |
| Kay-chan07 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseHaha, story was great, I loved the ending! :) |
| Slaugthered.Wings 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abusehaha i love the ending. Very well written! I like it :] |
| Dailenna 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseBahaha, I like that :D I can imagine Roy being the observer for quite a while in his life. It seems hard to imagine a child able to form words perfectly without having spoken before, but just as he studies better in private, I can see him practicing his words and sounds when everyone else went to sleep :P I love that first sentence of his, by the way. |
| Avenasoblivion 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was great! So funny. |