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| irishgirl9 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a beautiful story! |
| CSIFan4Life 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic. I liked how Kathy came to a realization about Olivia and Olivia about her own life. ~Jackie~ |
| mia66 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseNice chapter, I like this little interaction between Liv and Kathy, but I think Olivia would never open up to Kathy in that way, but you make it seam real. I like that this take place after the hug and things had settle down between Elliot and Olivia, that was a nice touch, thought I would have like "Thanks Liv" from him that just the hug, but we can't have it all ah! Just hope TPTB give Liv a someone to be with, be in love and posible the hint that she would be a mom in the show.(and if it is Elliot, he needs to be single again) anyway I Like your fic, like their chat and maybe this is what their relationship is about, only we can't see it,I love Liv I like Kathy. |
| EnforcerAndAccuserFan 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseA very open girl talk. Excellent! And I like how you portray Kathy as a pleasant person, just like she is on the show. I know that the EO shippers don't agree, and they are entitled to their opinion, but I like Elliot and Kathy back together, with Olivia acting as a partner on and off the job. And that fraternal hug at the show's end was the best gratitude that Elliot has shown anyone. But I digress. I enjoyed your piece, and hope Dick Wolfe takes note and shows more of the Olivia/Kathy friendship-especially if something happens to Elliot-again. |