Reviews for A Place in this World

Copaface 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI see that you haven't updated since last year, but I must say this is terrible writing. Your comma usage is ridiculous and the canons are extremely out of character. You have misspelled words and spacing between quotations aren't necessary. "and he had left to live on the wild side of New York at age twelve" ^ That was terribly cliched
DallasWinston 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseIf you think I'd waste my time playing stupid games with a bunch of little kids, you got rock where your brains oughta be.
NeverletRocknRollDie 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseLOVE IT!
TwoBitsBabe1527 2007-11-30 ch 1,	abuseI love it and thank you for having a dedication to me! hehehehehehehehehehehheeh:) anyway... hmm i love it as i alrady said and i cant wait to read the rest!