This is an awsome story and i will give you some ideas for the next chapter.number 1:make sure Ichigo wins over Rukia
Number 2:have Renji and Ichigo get into a fist fight over Rukia. Number 3:Please,Please,Please stop using the f word even though im not trying to be a mom i just dont like it and i really,really,really,really,really,really,really like this story. Number 4: the end does not made much sence. number 5: Have them try to save Rukia from...i dont know...a hollow. Last, number 6: the most important thing to make sure that Ichigo and Rukia kiss! Good-by

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Nah, very interesting.

nice duh... but really need to erase all the bad words...somehow, the bad words seem to spoil the story. well can't wait for the sequel