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| shootinstar88 2008-01-04 ch 1,  | abusegood choice of song i love that song my friends says that's me maneater , i reall enjoyed reading this story, you got the dance moves spot on i ould imagine the both of them dancing to it. |
| ObessedTWFan 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseYou go clubbing! Anyways maybe I'll have to take you one day...you don't have to drink and believe me it will be so crowded no one will see you. Love the fic even though I don't watch the show |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI like it!! But Lidsey is not a Maneater!! Only her and Danny! |
| Liffey 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, loved it! Hot. This could be a scene were the rest of the team finds out about them. Danny and Lindsay clubbing and then.. boom.. a murder in the club. The rest of the team comes in and everyone is puzzeled: "What the hell are those two are doing here?" Funny, another Nelly Furtado song reminds me of D/L everytime I hear it. It`s Promiscuous, and I think it`s the "How ya`doing" in the first line. ;o) Write more soon, you`re really talented! |
| NothatRose 2007-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou really made my day!...Thank you!...HOT!...Really HOT! |
| Lination 2007-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI would also like to see them dance too. This is great. Thanks. |
| daytimedrama 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseReally cute and hot. Great descriptions! |
| carly-babes11 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abusethat was great! sexy but geeky. loved this line "even her prints were scanned into his own personal AFIS". so CSI! :) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat one shot... I would love to see them dancing... JENNIFER |
| Yemam2422 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! It was very sensual and realistic - Danny not being a club person but letting Lindsay drag him along. "...but the familiarity of the body pressed against his, and the fingertips that grazed the back of his neck, or that gripped his bicep were nothing but road mapped into his nervous system. He knew those hands better than his own; every knuckle, every cuticle, even her prints were scanned into his own personal AFIS." - This was my favorite part, beautifully phrased. Considering how much they work with AFIS it's only expected that that would be a frame of reference for all things. Really great job! |