This is absolutely filled with REN completely and I love every bit of the details in the ficlet. Wonderful job! I wish I can be more elaborate with my reviews, about how much I love your little Skip Beat! ficlets, but I think I'll write nonsense here. T.T

aw. this was pretty good! for a second I thought he and kyoko were together, but then h said they weren't. i love this!

KYAHAHA~~!

I really REALLY hope that by the end of the manga, Ren IS "given the chance"

ugh. yes, *please*.

Aw~ This is such a sweet shot~ I quite like it~ Ren is so nicely portrayed~ >.< I love the way u wrote this...

How cute. I absolutely love this couple, and hadn't found a good story for them until now. Good work

Great as it is. I hate lemons, they're so cheap...I prefer that that be left to the imagination, as no one can say what is truly 'in character' for Ren and Kyoko in this case because the author has not included scenes that go this far. (And she probably won't later on, either, so we'll never know.)

I can see Ren thinking and feeling all of this...doesn't feel a bit OOC. Nice imagery.

oh that so sweet,it captures what he's feeling perfectly

wonderful.

Now that is classy. You should have gone on, I love reading lemons.

This is so sweet and sad! Very true to Ren and how he feels towards Kyoko and, well, physical intimacy with her.

it is beautiful, i nice short piece that captures what ren is feeling.

~chu!~

nakima-chan

It's a great fic, but in the real skip beat I think we will have to wait for 6 years before anything like that to happen.

You gave me hope. ^__^

QEGYUSGVBH -

Yeah, splendid.

Now, I want another one!

love /nazaliasan

This is excellent, I only hope that you add onto it. I mean it would be a true shame if you stopped here and never went on with it. Unless I totally misunderstood you wrote this sense you put down 'promt' for something. Anyway, it was excellent.