What a wonderful beginning to what a wonderful story. What touched me is that you set up everything here. You don't explain everything, yet everything is establish.

What touched me is your honesty to the characters' voices. Rosalie is lying to herself, as she always does: "Attachment? Why would I be attached to Vera's life. I'm not attached, I'm jealous. So I'll just sit out here all night, watching my friend's domestic tranquility, her peace, her happiness at her right choices, and I'll stay out here in the blackness of my own choices."

And, in the midst of her lie, you feel her struggle, already. The struggle of the Rosalie who can be, the struggle of the Rosalie who will be, if she just lets go of what got her here and embraces who she can be, who she really is under the Hale pride and vanity.

Beautiful, beautiful start for our Beautiful, beautiful Rosalie.

This story was amazing and beautiful. I absolutely loved all the twists and turns it had and all the different emtions and inner struggles Rosalie went through it was great. Beautiful story one of the best Ive read. ]

Oh Poor Rosalie! I'm glad you put this in... As a victim she would feel unclean and un-loveable, feelings that have formed the hard shell she shows to the world, and very important to understanding her character.

i was worried for emmett even though i know what happens

another creative killing. i kind of like that you are making them similar so that it is obvious they are done by the same person

very creative and i can totally see rosalie doing that

ahh cant wait to see what she does and who is first

esme is so sweet. im curious to how rose is going to find out who the man from georgia is

very intersting. i always wonder what she did to the men

This was amazing. I simply adored this story. Thank you for writing it, and so well at that. Fantastic.

George

I have read this story a number of times and it is still one of my favorites. You are an amazing writer! Please write more stories soon!

*claps and cheers* That was a really nice ending. You showed a different side of Rosalie Hale, she's not a bitch all the time, she has feelings and she went through a lot, this fic made me appreciate her more. :D It was so realistic and well-written.

aww.. I love this chapter :D who knew Emmett had it in him. )) Emmett's so sweet here, if he just didn't marry Rosalie, he'd be mine. )) Great job! You write really well! I could visualize and feel their emotions so well, it's realistic :D

Poor Eddie. It was fun to imagine him all uncomfortable lol loved the chapter, and I'm really thankful you didn't make it detailed..

"You can’t love, Rosalie. Love died for you long ago."

Brilliant!