FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Crankychangeling1 2008-07-02 ch 8,  | abuseGood story. I'm looking forward to further installments. ^_^ |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 8, | abuseThe suspense, it killing me! I hope you finish the sequel soon! |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 7, | abuseThe love between the two are fierce! I love how cute Robin sounds, and she gots a coll power! |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 6, | abuseSEX SCENE OF UTTER BEAUTY! That was HOT!lol! You don't find a lot of people who can write a good sex scene! |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 5, | abuseI hope this story doesn't make me cry! It makes your heart clench! |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 4, | abuse"TOGETHER WE CAN BE A HAPPY FAMILY!". |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 3, | abuseAW, I wish I had more Daddy moments! |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuseOMFG, WHAT!? I know she didn't just call him "Daddy"?! Did Buddy adopt her or something? |
| crazysmile15 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was a pretty funny start to your story! The wizard of the east, my God where have all the cool super villains gone!? |
| Chelsea Rose 2008-02-13 ch 8, | abuseI just finished reading this on dA tonight. I had no idea that it was on here. But, anyway, I absolutely love this story and your writing style. Simply phenominal. I can't wait for the next chapter to the sequel. .::.Chelsea.::. |
| KNick 2008-01-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseI've really enjoyed reading this story and I'm honestly surprised that there are not more reviews. I hope that you get around to writing a sequel as you've created a really good cliffhanger in the last chapter. I liked the story set-up, with Xerek (the unused villain from the film) as the true bad guy (although I do think that Buddy might have been a bit older before "teaming up" with Xerek -- it would have made more sense if it had happened AFTER Buddy got rejected by Mr. Incredible). I enjoyed how you expanded on the existing Canon of the film, adding Dicker's daughter and how different countries use/control the supers for those country's personal gain. Good use of the word "super" as an insult. Anyway, I hope that you choose to write more in the Incredibles fandom. Thanks for writing and sharing your story. :) |
| goldensomething 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseThis isn't the end right? Because this is an amazing story that must continue! Please! |
| Farther 2007-12-23 ch 7, | abuseaw, I really like this story so far. Love the depictions of Buddy and Violet, and Robin is very cute too. I hope you update soon! Although I have a feeling the meeting with Violet's family isn't going to go as smoothly as she hopes... |
| Mouse Kaiser 2007-12-17 ch 6, | abuseNot bad of a scene. Not bad at all. ;) |
| Mouse Kaiser 2007-12-09 ch 5, | abuseAwe... I like this chapter, very adorable. |