From the point of Hank?! Thats brilliant!
And this story was soo sweet!

Great perspective! Griss would never send Bruno/Hank back...

I liked it. At first I thought it was Grissom speaking, but at the second paragraph I thought "Hm, something's quite off" and then it dawned on me (before the confirmation in paragraph three) that it was Bruno ahem Hank speaking.
Thanks!

I really like it. At first I was confused because of the POV, but it didn't take me long to figure it out. It's really cute that you wrote it from Bruno, uh, I mean, Hank's POV.