I like this poem, i really do. I'm not sure why, but it really interested me. ^.^
I like the rhyming and the way the poem flowed, it's very good. ^.^

R

P.S. I realise that i probably sound stupid as my sentences don't really flow, but it's half past 2 in the morning where i live and i'm not very focused...

i like the rhyming. u r brill at riting poems by the way.
saz