 Erixil 8/24/04 . chapter 6I'm quite a fan of your stories and hope you update them soon. I like pain people go thorough! _ Angst is great. |
 Sakura53 7/8/04 . chapter 5 hey you are a really good writer and please update cause you are killin me with the wait |
 LilAznSp0nge 1/18/04 . chapter 6MORE MORE MORE! ITS GREAT! PlEASE CONTINUE! |
 Death Past Words 8/17/03 . chapter 6Dang...
Dang...
A really good story! I love it!
I must say, your descriptions are amazing! They painted a picture in my head. But didn't it get annoying to have to put the short description of each card Sakura uses? I would try to limit my usage of the cards. I kept wanting to skip the description of the cards so I could get to know what was happening!
This story had alot of events to keep us interested, but also had just enough calm moments to make it seem like it wasn't all action and adventure. I like that in a story.
The beginning was kind of sudden. It wasn't nearly as good as the rest of your story. Li's appearance was much to sudden, you didn't allow enough time for the main plot of the story to unfold. But... as the story progressed, you made up for that. Just remember that the beginning of the story is the main key to catching the reader's attention. Shoving events made it too sudden.
Ah... But you are the better writer here! -; Just a piece of advice I thought you could use, please don't be offended by my comments!
Do post up your next chapter soon! I'm going to keep an eye on this story! |
 Serbii 5/19/03 . chapter 6 uh Kurai? are you going to update um ever? I like this story and think it could be really good so please update |
 serbii 12/8/02 . chapter 6well done! the 2nd CCS story ive read and the best! |
 Darkoverlord 11/10/02 . chapter 6I enjoy your story a lot and are looking foward to an update |
 Jyvette 8/18/02 . chapter 6Very good fanfic! lol I love it, and very good plot! Keep up the good work _ |
 cutie pie 8/3/02 . chapter 6 Quick! Quick! Quick! Update now! I must read more! I must say my friend,GREAT FIC! |
 Moonlit Rain 8/3/02 . chapter 6Interesting story! Please continue! |
 cherryjam 8/2/02 . chapter 6 you must continue writing this story! i love the
ideas you have in these stories(of course,i love anything that has to do with Li) |
 giggleplex 8/2/02 . chapter 6Exelent fight scene. Ah, so the plot thickens. However, I personally would have put a little bit more discription into the emotions. That choice is entirely up to you though. Update soon? |
 chickey poo 8/2/02 . chapter 5 I really hope you add a new chapter soon.
cliff hangers are never fun to the readers. |
 Pink Cherry Blossom 7/28/02 . chapter 5That was scary. Keep writing, I hope Li can do something. It seems so tragic right now...T_T |
 The BOOKWORM 7/26/02 . chapter 4nice
very nice
very very nice
very very very nice
okay i'll stop since i'm proberly freaking you out now.
continue
must continue
must must continue
must must must continue
okay seriously i'll stop now! |