Reviews for Sixth Year: The Steps Toward The End

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Kage of the village hidden ... 2008-08-29 ch 20,	abuseIts sad how few reviews this story has. I think its amazing, Your devolping the characters so deeply. How many chapters do you think this will be?
Johnny Bravo J 2008-08-23 ch 20,	abuseGreat story so far. Can't wait for next chapter.
deFox 2008-08-20 ch 19,	abuseWell I’m certainly not going to read this anymore. I stopped reading after Harry decided not to do anything against Ginny and to talk about this to Dumbledore. The fact that Harry is happily not doing anything to someone who tried to enslave him is just ridiculous. And then he wants to go to talk about that to Dumbledore, how he does not trust… And why won’t they do anything to Molly, who absolutely DID KNOW what the spell did to its victim? Ron also knows the spell, has used it and, as things are, will most likely use it again against his next infatuation. And if they don’t want to hurt anyone, why don’t they think about Arthur, who most likely is still currently under the spell. After all Hermione just read that if the spell were removed, the love would not last. No matter what their goals and morals are the chosen course of action is stupid…
DaxLP 2008-08-15 ch 20,	abuseYay! Harry got over Fleur, about time. I'm not really surprised it took him this long, but if I had someone like Ginny after me I think I'd prefer to think about Fleur than a mad fan girl with a love spell fetish. This chapter answers a few questions but makes even more appear at the same time, excellent chapter.
PapaMidNite 2008-08-06 ch 20,	abuseThere's so many women to chose from, I actually don't know which way this ship will go. Keep up the good work. pm
XoreandoX 2008-08-05 ch 20,	abuseGreat Story, started reading chapter one and kept going till now. Love the suspense you build up with both the pairing and the never ending war.
Ebrius 2008-08-04 ch 1,	abuseGood work pat on th back
Dragon63 2008-08-03 ch 20,	abuseAs much as we all know that Harry desires friendship, affection, and intimacy, we also know that he tends to lump them all together and finds it difficult to consider them separately. I, for one, am hoping that what he will learn from his interlude with Fleur is that sometimes "friends with benefits" is all that some intimate interactions need to be, and that sexual intimacy can often just be fun without a lot of emotional "baggage." Granted, Harry will probably never be sexually intimate with a girl/woman he doesn't at least like, but I am hoping that he will learn to accept Susan's and Hannah's Christmas gift to him, and its implicit offer, in the fun and friendly spirit in which it was given. Don't worry so much about the description of all the gifts being too drawn out or "boring." In Harry's current introspective state, it's to be expected... plus it will make it easier for your audience (us readers, lol!) to keep track of all the various little subplots that will become associated with each gift. Excellent chapter!
Memory King 2008-08-02 ch 20,	abuseAwesome update, as expected. The story is moving along at a steady pace, even if it's a bit slower than normal. Can't wait to read more!
Kerney 2008-08-02 ch 20,	abuseHaving had a simular situation with my own family for different reasons, I think you write the break between Padma and Parvarti very well. You continue to write well and get better. I love the gift that Susan and Hannah gave and I can't read about the result. All the Best, Kerney
Le Diablo Blanc2 2008-08-02 ch 1,	abusereally loved reading this story its interesting to see the interractions with all the girls harry has in his life god help him choosing just one really enjoying the harry/padma scenes as well as the xmas present from susan and hannah. cant wait to read what happens next
Andrius 2008-08-02 ch 20,	abuseAha, I bet Fleur has feelings for Harry since she gave him that kind of gift.
phoebe turner 2008-08-02 ch 20, anon.	abusegret chapter!
Kwisatz Haderach 2008-08-02 ch 20,	abuseExcellent chapter. Your character development is coming along nicely. Padma was pretty much an open book at the start due to her being nothing more than an extra in canon. You've done a great job in giving her a solid personality and being able to stick with it. I'm still hoping for Harry to end up with Fleur. You keep hinting towards this pairing, so I can only pray you will not change your mind. Cheers!
Underscore1990 2008-08-02 ch 20,	abuse24hrs I am counting down, lucky you don't start Uni til Monday, I need more chapters and there weren't any over the holidays :( Update faster, your story too slow for a slow update rate. There isn't any constructive criticism I can give. This is one of the better stories on fanfic.

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