This was sweet, and an interesting take on the early interaction between the Titans. I like how something as mundane as rain can be frightening if viewed through new eyes.

Blah blah blah good characterization etc., you're amazing and I loved it. :-)

Awwww. This was so unbearably sweet! It was most glorious! Hope you keep writing

DAWH! TOO CUTE! Better than lemons! TOO CUTES :))))

Don't forget the Thunder and Lightning! *wink*

A novel take on what we all thought we knew. Very nice.

Your work has a way of waking my Muse. She's now pestering me about a story where Starfire explores the ocean for the first time, since such a thing was unknown on Tamaran.

It's all your fault!

make more

A look into their minds, and why things change. Very well done.

Adorable! :D Very sweet!

That was the sweetest thing I have ever read in the history of everything. This has officially made my day.

these are just so CUTE! LOL and i aswell laughed at the face i imagined starfire to have made- awesome once again!

I absolutely LOVED this.

This was really, really good. You showed incredible insight into the characters (which, by the way, you portrayed flawlessly) as well as the general setting of the show itself. It's great.

The one thing I wonder about though...

Starfire says there's no rain on her planet, and yet she remarks how strange it is to see water falling from the sky. This, to me, says she has water on Tamaran. Now I ask: How else would Tamaran get water if not from rain? I know its a desert planet but even deserts get rain sometimes.

Its just something that puzzled me.

Other then that you did a fantastic job. I'll be sure to check out some of your other stories soon.

-Sir Alwick

Okay, not going to lie, I freaking love this. It shows a good way to start off the friendship between the two, and especially how Robin would react to Starfire's constant questioning at first.

You are truly a gifted writer. Great job!