Love it! Totally wicked:)

Wow. Cool. Skinning Logan? And, "Do angels bleed?"

Interesting. Your story has a haunting quality to it that is strangely captivating.

Although, it was too fast paced, the narration wasn't played out long enough for the concepts and haunting quality to have settled properly.

On a more personal note, I tend to disagree with the 'angel concept', but that is only my own belief. As a writer, my objective view is that this would have been a very good piece had you written it out in several chapters, thus allowing you to focus on each scene and implement the theme more fully.

All in all, it was good, although there were some things that conflicted with my own beliefs as a person. However, as a writer, I believe this story has great potential, again, only if you focused on the scenes more fully. It would have been best if you separate them into chapters.

Cheers!

-Pinka14

Whoo ! That's not something you read everyday. It's a good piece a work, very strange and haunting ! You did a very good job with all the characters. Logan crying seems normal, credible. Bravo !

Yeah, i'm years behind everyone else...i just decided to narrow the story options to Wolverine fics that are complete and started at the end...:)

Rating: Two tissues...and don't let anyone tell you that a crying Wolvie is out of character...anyone who says that hasn't read the comics...he cries, just not often and not without a really good reason...loved this story...:)

hugz,

rowena

i love the story. its so sad.

Very capturing. Some scenes remain questionable. Very good. Three stars. *

Damn, you *are* good.

Hey, i loved your story.. i can't find the words to express what i thought of it.. it was beautifully crafted and idea i've never heard of.. i really enjoyed it.. :)

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Good story. Great story, even. But Logan... well, he just doesn't ring true as the Wolverine to me. Still, excellent writing.