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| Phantom Melody 2008-09-29 ch 4, | abuseawesome! |
| anonymous 2008-09-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat story. Please continue :) |
| The Demonic-Angel King 13 2008-05-03 ch 4, | abuseHah! This is a great story keep up the great work and update soon! :P |
| Chaotic Angel7 2008-03-25 ch 4, | abusehahaha this was cute ^_^ I found myself laughing my butt off reading this! I hope you are still going to update this story. I’m going to have to watch out for this lol Oh, before I forget. May I suggest putting little dividers between different scenes or point of views. Like this for an example - This will help with the few confusing parts in fic. Other then that I love reading it! *gives thumbs up* |
| snekochan 2008-03-13 ch 3, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story! ^-^ It's a good read...although things seem to happen a little abruptly at times, for the most part it's well written. ^-^ (plus ChronoxRosette fluff is fun.) |