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Reviews For: To Give the Gift of Life

Phantom Melody
2008-09-29
ch 4,
abuseawesome!
anonymous
2008-09-23
ch 4, anon.
abuseGreat story. Please continue :)
The Demonic-Angel King 13
2008-05-03
ch 4,
abuseHah! This is a great story keep up the great work and update soon! :P
Chaotic Angel7
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abusehahaha this was cute ^_^ I found myself laughing my butt off reading this! I hope you are still going to update this story. I’m going to have to watch out for this lol
Oh, before I forget. May I suggest putting little dividers between different scenes or point of views. Like this for an example
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This will help with the few confusing parts in fic. Other then that I love reading it! *gives thumbs up*
snekochan
2008-03-13
ch 3,
abuseI'm really enjoying this story! ^-^ It's a good read...although things seem to happen a little abruptly at times, for the most part it's well written. ^-^ (plus ChronoxRosette fluff is fun.)
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