Not bad! I like that it was organized into time increments.

i liked it. it was nice. felt they stayed in character. thanks.

Aw so sweet Kinda confusing with the time skipping back and forth, but that made it interesting.

I really love how you made them describe their relationship. I love this fic :) Lizzie and Edwin are so cute!

I really liked your version of The Party episode...a little more mature than I thought it would be, but still good.

You are an amazing writer. How is that I haven't read anything of yours before now? Anyway, I like the way this jumps around and once I started reading the times correctly it made a lot of sense.

The Party has to be one of my favorite episodes, probably since it was the first one I ever saw. I was waiting for them to start making out in the bathroom before I realized A) stuff like that doesn't happen on Disney and B) they were sadly, stepsiblings (because of course, I came in halfway through the episode). But I have to say that I like your version of their parties a whole lot more.

I like how you didn't have to go into explicit detail to get the point across. You just threw in a comment here or there and let us come to the conclusions ourselves. It takes a talented writer to know just how much to include and how much is best left to the imagination.

I also liked how you tied the title in to Derek's confessions at the end as well as to the line from the original episode.

--MM

awesome i love you! lols

Loved it :)

LOVE IT! GREAT JOB!

It took a bit to get used to, but I definitely loved it. Great job making the whole thing interesting and unique but still flow nicely. Great story! :)

I admit it took a while to get used to the time switches, but otherwise, that was unbelievably cute. And hot. Quite hot.

Way to go for retaining the T rating.

I think that the Lizwin implications were my favorite part of this story. The chronology was a bit hard to follow, maybe just because of actual page formatting, but your characterizations were spot-on and I loved that someone wrote an alternate ending (of sorts) to The Party because that episode was begging for it. :-)

Aw, I really liked this! Well done.

LOVed it. :]

:D Great story! :)