*evil cackle* OMGawh . . . no, this is too funny and just my kind of crazy. Goody goody gumdrops, GO COUNT D! Leon, take it like the man you are!

I like this story and could possiby see this happening since D always seems to have the upper hand on Leon.
There's not many stories where Leon is the uke which is kind of sad since, as I've already said, D usually has the upperhand.

Bravo! Very well done and I throughly enjoyed it! One of the best fanfictions I've read in a long time and with one of my favorite pairings [[not to mention style]].

I hope you work on more stories like this in the near future!
Thanks for the read and have a great one!

-Sark

o.i so like this...

Very nicely done, though plant extract or not there should still have been some preparation. Nevertheless, loved this story.

lol

haha! that was fun!

hehe..."BUT I'M NOT GAY!"
I really enjoyed this one!

Your spelling is a lot better in this chapter! It makes it so much easier to read.

Having said that, I must say this was an interesting story. We don't see D take the lead very often, he's usually put in the more submissive role. haha But that's not a bad thing, it's good to shake things up a bit.

You may want to work on your spelling. If you don't have spell check on your computer, you could always try spellcheck dot net. (sorry, FFN doesn't allow actual web addresses)

I really never saw D as the seme, and I've certainly never thought of Leon as an uke, so I was surprised at how well this worked. Poor Leon... he really had no chance.

LOL! when leon saying he's not gay all i can think is ...yeah yeah leon...keep telling urself that...

lol i enjoyed reading this. thanks for sharing

Oh my. XD I have to admit, that was pretty steamy lol I loved the humor in between, and how D was teasing him the entire time, enjoying every moment of it. I ought to start reading the manga.

Anyway, keep up the good work! ^_^

-Matsuda

That was a very evil cliff hanger, my dear. I must say, it is very well written, but yur spelling needs work. Please continue.

wow lol that WAS an evil cliffhanger. you should be ashamed of yourself. xD

you have a lot of spelling mistakes, btw. maybe you should read it over before posting.

funny!