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| WriterOfAThousandWords.Bree... 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem, and I can offer no critisism because I haven't got a rhyme in me. |
| Mark R. Whitten 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseVery touching and moving, but I think that it could have had a stronger ending. Maybe if he said how much he missed her and how grateful he was to have once known her, it would be a more fulfilling conclusion to this phenomanal poem. |