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| Kitten Kisses 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseThe only thing that bothers me? No capitalization in title, and...Oscar and André's names in the summary. I like this style. It's interesting, to say the least. Oscar's characterization is intriguing and André is his usual cool, calm, always-willing-to-try-and-pacify self. Great job. -Manna |
| The Dishwasher 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseYes...the way it could have been... I like the characterisation of feral Oscar and the description of her internal struggles. |