Wow, that was sudden. I was expecting some sort of build up. I would expect something like this from 'Moments', this story seemed to have longer chapters. Ah well, I'll be waiting for an explanation next chapter, so it should end well. I suppose I'll take the moment to go back a chapter, seeing as I forgot to mention I laughed at Seth with a Brooklyn accent. And then promptly tried it out myself. Anyway, I think it's time for bed, I'll force myself to wait for any sort of conclusion until tomorrow.

Twilight Rurouni

It would be wrong to say that was predictable, but I did think that Seth would use the word engagement to mean appointment. And Forde, oh Forde, I love the way you've portrayed him, he's great for comic relief, after having built up some tension of course. The other thing I like is the way they're all like family, it brings a very warm feeling to the story. Nice work.

Twilight Rurouni

'"No one is going to get laid on this vacation," ' Huzzah! Go Ephraim, stick it to 'em! Seriously though, I laughed at that, which was probably the point. Other than that, I like how you have this chapter in Seth's perspective, there isn't any of that in 'Moments' and it was actually a really nice change. Lets us know he's not always in control, despite what everyone thinks. On an ending note, the way you joke about their money is quite humorous, I love your style.

Twilight Rurouni

Bahahaha! I'm still laughing over the 'I was heir to a fiber-optic company; it was adorable that he worried about my finances.' line! She dropped that and I just busted out, who cares if it's almost 2 AM?! Oh wow, let me try to express my giddy mood as I calm down. Yes, you are right, everyone should write a Christmas fic, and you did it wonderfully. It had everything a good Christmas fic should , but it was hardly boring or cliche. I loved this chapter. I did see that you spelled Natasha as Nathasha, but I'm sure you already know that. Great post, I'm so glad I'm reading these after the fic's been completed.

Twilight Rurouni

I TOLD you I had to start reading it. And I did. And I am happy. Seriously, I wish I had started this sooner. It was hilarious, and full of 'aws' and awkward silences where I refused to scroll down for a minute or two. I think my favorite line was,

"Oh wow," I blurted and instantly wanted to kick myself. I’d met his girlfriend. Natasha had poise; I had "oh wow."

That just made me laugh, and quite loudly considering how late it is. Anyway, this is a great first chapter, and I'm glad you turned it into 'Moments'. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Twilight Rurouni

Oh.mi.gosh! I LOVE SETH x EIRIKA! Ever since I started the game, I could just imagine them together! And... I just recently did come to the conclusion that SOMETHING may pop up between Natasha and Seth. I haven't finished the game yet, but gah.

I love your fic! I'm on my way to read the rest of them! XD Thanks so much for a lovely read. Keep up the good work! XD

Much love!

That. Was. Amazing.

I started reading this pretty late. Then I stayed up 'til 3:30 to finish it. I just couldn't close the window! It really was perfect. Gave me little butterflies in my tummy, made me smile and well really, want more. I hope you will write the longer AU story, I really liked this!

Sorry, it’s taken me so long to finally review. . .

"You’re wearing clothes. I disapprove." Lmao. A forward Eirika? Ah, that’s funny. . .

“His voice, low and rumbling in his chest like a purr, makes me tremble.” Okay, so the word “purr” is used a lot in romance fics, but this still makes me fangirl. Seth. . . purring. . .

Yaye! Everyone is happy. You could write all kinds of AUs. Do one of those high school AUs. You know where Seth is the Captain of the Football team and Eirika is the school council president? *snerkle* Or you could go the SGA route and write them as inanimate objects. Jennifer read a story where John and Rodney were socks that lived in a sock drawer together. Maybe Seth could be an Oak tree and Eirika could be a rose bush that grew near him.

Good job on the story. I liked how it paralleled the game there near the end.

J

I also want to marry Forde. Or as a consolation prize, I want Forde to marry Kyle.
J

Seth thinks dirty thoughts. That is made of win.
J

I want to marry Ephraim.

Hahaha... Eirika is having dirty thoughts about Seth's naughty bits. I had a funny thought while reading this, (Since it is AU and everything.) The Sacred Stones set as an opera or a musical. Think of it. Seth would be a Baritone. It doesn't get sexier than that. Eirika is a lead so it would follow that she should be a soprano, however I don't like the brightness of a lyric soprano...Maybe a nice warm coloratura soprano. That would sound nice with a Baritone anyway. Let me see... Ephraim would be a Tenor. One of those powerful rich toned ones. Nice. Lyon could be a tenor, but the Demon King would be a Basso Profundo. L'Arachel would be a Lyric (high and bright) soprano and Tana can be a mezzo soprano. Kyle a Baritone. Forde a Tenor.

Ok. Now on to an actual review. I like this. AU is fun. I have only read the first chapter and will spam you with reviews on every chapter.

J

you know, that was one of my fav fics for fire emblem ever. really well done and uber cool idea that you actually made work perfectly. some people would've gone crazy and had like futurisitc robots attack them or whatever but you tamed it nicely. plus i love seth and eirika. awesome job. kudos. and if you're looking for a read check out my fe8 fic, i think you'll like it,

Very cute and fluffy ending and an excellent story throughout. I think you have this pairing perfected and I think your work is fabulous!