 Mark 2009-04-22 . chapter 2 aww there dead! (samus was pretty hot). THAT WAS FREAKING HILARIOUS! |
 Supa Artemis and Supa Cheyenne 2009-04-01 . chapter 4Oh, wow. I feel weird reviewing this since you haven't updated in two years, but that was hilarious.
And I always knew Marth was a killer. Always. |
 Ripper22 2009-01-02 . chapter 4Nice story. Are you ever going to update?
Suggestions:
1. Have Lucas steal an item from every single smasher-- and survive the rest of the day!
2. Star in a horrible rated R movie.
3. Is forced to be in an Amazing Race (Wait...that's already Done!)
That's...all I gots. Hope you update soon.
-Ripper22 |
 Sir Starlll 2008-11-19 . chapter 4Yoshi's dead. Hahahaahahahah. |
 HyperInuyasha 2008-02-02 . chapter 4To revive all the smashers that Lucas killed. (except for Lyn and Amy, since they're not smashers) |
 ligerzero626 2008-01-09 . chapter 4make him insolt Palutena infront of pit. |
 navokin 2007-12-20 . chapter 4 Lol this story is awesome!
I like how you describe the murderous and bloody occurance with every detail you can think of!!
Please keep em' coming |
 ACT II 2007-12-20 . chapter 4This was the best chapter yet I guess or yeah.
But what happened to Master Hand's thumb? the others trembled or sweated...
I'm sueing.
'K. |
 SkylerOcon 2007-12-20 . chapter 4 Hm... Mwaha!
Perfect idea. Make Lucas have to survive through 24 hours straight of Runescape!
Now that is inhumane torture. |
 Razzkat 2007-12-20 . chapter 4Thank you for the outdated Huckleberry Finn made-for-TV-adaptation rental, Hoogi!
...Oh yes, and very good chapter...Master Hand...I think needs some therapy, though...Lucas should take him to see Dr. Phil... |
 Gooey 2007-12-19 . chapter 4I do indubitably hate to say that this was quite (very) hilarious. I do hate to say it because I don't like talking in a positive manner, so now I must run to Albania in a hot air balloon. And that hot air balloon wouldn't have cold air because if it did, it wouldn't rise. YAYZ MASTER HAND IS EVIL!
Do update soon!
Toodles!
(Pretend that was said in a posh English accent.) |
 Lowlife 2007-12-15 . chapter 1There's other. Have Lucas go to the dentist. |
 SkylerOcon 2007-12-08 . chapter 3My suggestion?
Lucas becomes black and hangs out with Jigglypuff's gangster possy. |
 Razzkat 2007-12-04 . chapter 3YAY. Another very funny chapter...I'm...glad Master Hand found out why Yoshi complained about indigestion?? Also, would Lucas like to do my homework for me? I'd give him moneys...(REAL moneys...) |
 Lowlife 2007-12-04 . chapter 3Love it lol. Lucas can't possibly just enter brawl! So... There's my ideas!
1) Lucas has to spend 72 hours in the same room with a old man with no teeths telling his life-story. And he can't get out of the room. Tests if he can survive the horror!
2) Lucas has to speak in L33T the whole three hours? With his own tongue? That way he can learn how to speak in foreign languages and he will even get a twisted tongue!
3) Lucas has to eat 25 pieces of stinkin' old cheese. Can he handle it? Or will he get sick for months? (P.S. Make Lucas believe he only has to eat one piece of cheese. Then when he did that show him the rest of the stinkin' old cheeses)
4) Make Lucas kick someone tough in the shins (Preferably Mewtwo or Samus) and try NOT to get caught! (Or killed)
5) Lucas has to make a account on deviantart and get 10,0 views
6) Starring in a movie! Pick any horror or bloody movie. Your choice. |