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| FusseKat 2008-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseI love the serious undertone blended with humor. And a good Orange Danish with a cup of joe. |
| Blue Wolf2 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! That was a very Bobby way to start to get back into her good graces. |
| SilverNimbus 2008-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abusei love how witty eames is. Goren is a hoot and darling in ever way. keep it up! |
| The Confused One 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseAww. So sweet! And it's so good! I totally agree. I miss the old connection, the banter. I miss the Bobby and Alex I loved so much. I wish things would really get better with them and they'd get back at least some of that. The show needs it. Anyway, fabulous work. :) I love how Bobby started the rebuilding. |
| rindy713 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusevery nice! i like it! i do want them to get back on the same wavelength, and i think you found a nice way for them to do it. |
| whoisthis 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed this! it was quirky and a little angsty too...bittersweet, even. i think you captured the rapport between these two that's been missing lately. |
| guitar73girl 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! And you got thenm both so right I could picture this unfolding. |
| ereganto-tatsu-namida 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseAw...thats so like them! It made me smile. Very good. |
| Denese925 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fun piece. It made me realize how much I miss this type of comraderie with these two. It really is OOC now. |
| Kyasurin-chan 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED it! I wish they'd do cute little things like this inthe actual show... Bobby and Alex have been out of tune lately... *Sigh* |
| Kismet23 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI think this is really sweet (bad pun, oops) and I enjoyed your take on the need for peace between the partners. Great job! |
| Ruby Rosetta Red 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseMost definitely loved it. You write so beautifully, i was quickly drawn into this. You've captured them both so well, the individual characters as well as their partnership and Bobby's mannerisms. Most definitely loved this :) |
| TriStateCopFan 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! I definitely miss the banter and rapport between them, although I must admit I've been enjoying the drama and angst of late, too. I think that VDO was a little heavier at one time, and might be on his way to losing a bit of weight recently...but I like him either way...his little tummy doesn't bother me a bit. Anyway, nice story. |
| Andy 2007-11-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOVED IT! Ugh, the shows been a little too angsty recently, this was the perfect pick me up. Are there really orange danishs? |
| Sappy13 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I especilly liked Eames comment about naming it, it was hilarious! Great job |