Reviews for England School Trip

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xrxixsxexmxbxoxoxlxrxaxnxgx... 2008-06-29 ch 7,	abuseMORE RICHARD PLEEZE!
lae10 2008-03-25 ch 7,	abuseI like this story. It's really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
happy-reader007 2008-03-24 ch 7,	abusei am suprised. this is really good. You have loads of characters from different places but they all fit well together. a few minor mistakes that i wont bother telling you what they are. but they are there. this is very good. write more pwease
muzicdreamz 2008-03-17 ch 7,	abuseHey! Thank you so much for your review! It made me so happy! Okay, down to business: I love your story's plot. But, I wish you could descrive the people/places more. I want to get to know them. But I love your story! It's really good! Update soon! Dark is Rising rox! - muzicdreamz
Wise Night Raven 2008-03-03 ch 7,	abuseNeh, short chapter. But, as long as the story gets across in the end, It doesn't really matter. Well, in my opinion, anyway. I can't wait to see what happens when Matt finds out that Will is an Old One. Wait, he will, right? O.O
Eldar-Melda 2008-02-28 ch 7,	abusethat's good. do you writte a crossover between the two series of AH? that's funny and no bad at all.
Someone aka Me 2008-02-06 ch 7,	abuseThis is good. I love the combing of stories, though it does help that I've read them all!
Thugqueen 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseLove your story!
Jake Caldefore 2008-01-02 ch 7,	abuseI'm lost. Seriously. I like the story, but the truth is, it's confusing, the plot is slipping, and it just doesn't make any sense! Random characters keep popping up without an explanation or a proper introduction. Plus, everything is too instantaneous. Do things gradually. Don't surprise the reader unless it's in the plot/storyline. And don't confuse them either. Other than that, it's fantastic, and please update soon! Wow. That was the longest review I've ever written. Keep writing, Jake
musiclover33 2008-01-01 ch 7,	abuseShort but good! Update soon.
CunningMascara 2007-12-20 ch 3,	abuseHello again. You've assured me I don't need to contact you through a review, but here I am. Again. Would you please turn on your messaging button? It's difficult to talk wihtout it, and I'm not very observant. I can't see something when it's in front of my face, screaming My Chemical Romance I'm Not Okay. I would be delighted to work with you on The Power of Alex. I'm flattered that you've asked me, but I wouldn't be able to start working on it until January 3 of 2008. I'll write out a few ideas of a chapter while I'm away.
CunningMascara 2007-12-20 ch 1,	abuseNo, you did not send the message twice. Is it possible that you could turn on your pm? I'm new, yes, but if it's already turned on could you instruct me on how to turn mine on? Anyhow, I think if you continued The Power of Alex, you could write it very well. Just research some self-defense (karate, hep-ki-do, etc, etc). Try not to make it into a Mary-Sue though, kay? I'm fairly sure you probably read in the AR section too, so you know how tired everyone is of Mary-Sues and perfect American girl spies. You seem to know this series very well, and since Alex Rider is tied with HP for your favorite, I think you could set a real example. If you haven't read any Alex Rider fanfictions yet, I suggest you check them out. Amitai and mnl1143 are excellent examples of what Alex Rider fans like. I also suggest you read other stories to find what you SHOULDN'T be doing. You can find these very easily. If you need any help, contact me. I could be your beta-reader, even though I've a very vague idea what that is.
CunningMascara 2007-12-19 ch 2,	abuseJust wondering, but have you ever read the Alex Rider series? It's by the same author. I like the story, but I think you could write better if you wrote about more action. You could pick up on TGIF but only onces a week crossover between the two books. Anyhow, I do like the story. Keep writing!
Charmed786 2007-12-19 ch 6,	abuseBit short..But I like it..Plz update soon
musiclover33 2007-12-14 ch 5,	abuseUp date soon!

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