Ok, he broke her quill. . . why? For amusement? No, it was because he was grumpy, wasn't it?

Hahahahahaha Malfoy!

Sweet! Great chapter!

Good look--this is why I buy cheap paperbacks at garage and library sales, so if they die it's not that big a deal.

This is kind of sad, really.

Ouch.

It's malign fate - anyone who says "I never catch..." promptly catches it.

Lucius's final year would have been either Snape's first or second year, according to the 1960 birthdate for Snape given in DH, and assuming the Prophet got Lucius's age right when it said he was 41 in an article written in mid-September 1995.

It's a very nice scene, and the sort of thing I think he would appreciate. At the same time, the writing-style seems a bit too florid - one keeps noticing the writing instead of the story.

Hmm, interesting. Seems to hint at some other things...

I think by "sheath of papers" you meant "sheaf of papers"?

That was strangely, sad, but yet very emotion- provoking.

Hm, I love it.

Oh, I'm sorry you weren't invited!

But it does make for a good Severus fic

Aww! Sweet!

o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-h I like.

But one suggestion, though.

If he's the teen version of Severus Snape, would he still be referred to as "Snape", not "Severus"?

Just a little thought.

Severus' life seems to be nothing but a series of unfortunate events. I liked the cold one the best. Lucius and Severus are funny when they converse.

I like this one, although I feel sorry for poor Severus. On both sides, the people he thinks are his friends turn out not to be much of "friends".

(Should there be a comma in "Avery Mulciber and his entourage."? Avery and Mulciber are two separate people.)