 corybee 2009-08-23 . chapter 1I won't lie, I thought this was turning into a predictable matchmaker-type fic once the spying party came up at the beginning, but I was so pleasantly surprised by the way this turned out. Great job with both of their personalities. I loved the loaded question regarding fixing the 'broken' heater and how it instantly flipped the table on Yamamoto and his role in their relationship (for once being in control). The fic is sweet but sexy (even though everything graphic was only merely hinted at) and totally won me over. I am so obsessed with these two, but that obsession's only getting worse the more I read great fics like this! Nicely done ^_^ |
 Alizzo 2009-07-15 . chapter 1 wow.
just wow.
i don't even know what to say to you anymore.
That was just so...KICKAS! wOAHZ 8D
long live 8059 ^3^ |
 Nush-Mish 2009-06-15 . chapter 1cute. Real cool, I love the part where Gokudera was drunk and kind-of-sweet and Yamamoto pushes him away 'cause he doesn't want it to be something he'll regret. And the last kiss- like Yamamoto said- "Wow." ;)
Yama's kind of uke here though, not really used to that, but the essence is very well done. <3
~nush |
 zunmo 2009-05-24 . chapter 1Oh, that was PERFECT. I haven't read much KHR fanfic, but the way you wrote Gokudera was just... adorably in character. Your writing has a definite flair to it that I like VERY much :] |
 hoshi-hime 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Mah~ I adore this fic. It makes me smile a lot~
I love your style so much, I could read it for hours and never get bored. So IC, so poetic, so perfect~
Thank you for writing this; I hope you write more.
~hoshi-hime |
 ms. phishy 2009-01-27 . chapter 1Asdgsdfhfghf wow!
Late comment is late, but holy crap, this was amazing! So pretty and evocative and just. Raw.
I actually got, like, butterflies in the stomach as I was reading this - and am thus convinced that it should become the reigning manifesto of 8059. For serious.
Great stuff!! |
 mollypocket 2009-01-19 . chapter 1Tsuna and the others hiding in the bush: brilliant.
I love their text message convo.
All of it is awesome! |
 Yamamo-chan 2008-12-14 . chapter 1Very nice.
-He trusts Gokudera…and he trusts Yamamoto.
Even though he’s spying on them (against his will). Behind a bush (against his will). Because Kyoko-chan and Haru begged (he said yes).
So much for the Vongola resolve.-
And this:
-There. Second potential crisis of the day evaded. Yamamoto is on a roll, it seems.-
This is a wonderful piece. You portrayed the characters in excellent fashion. I hope that you keep up the good work.
And yes, German beer is, indeed, some good **.
Ja. |
 graveyardgirl15 2008-07-14 . chapter 1A mature 8059 is something I rarely stumble upon here, and this is very well-written and everyone's in character. Loved it! The 8059 pairing needs more stories like this one.. ^_^ -added to favorites- |
 Yodori 2008-06-09 . chapter 1absolutely loved it! |
 Pseudo Girl 2008-05-17 . chapter 1 "Wednesday.
Silent treatment lifted.
However.
Gokudera only speaks Italian."
that was halrious! Good Job! |
 jam2599 2008-05-05 . chapter 1I've read a few 8059 fanfiction stories, but yours is the only one that really captures their personalities, or at least, how I see Gokudera and Yamamoto and how I would expect them to act in a relationship--the conflicted, aggressive, insecure Gokudera, and the gentle, patient, loving Yamamoto.
I thought Yamamoto's thoughts of being Italian/mafioso, and liking Italian things, and also his admission that he would enjoy communication with Gokudera even if it was in Italian, were all pretty funny.
This was a very sweet story, with enough humor and sexiness to bring interest beyond what would be found in a "sappy story" but also more realistic and responsible than the "Yamamoto screwing Gokudera into the floor" stuff on . |
 Mahon 2008-05-01 . chapter 1Tsk tsk, those crazy heaters. |
 ummduckie 2008-04-16 . chapter 1uh, ill most likely be reading this over and over again, i liked it so much. you are excellent. i dont know what to say other than i love love love loved it, and thanks ^^;
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 AngolMoaChan 2008-03-12 . chapter 1akjfsdkjghklsjfd *FLAIL*
I feel the need to bow down to you right now. First DeiTobi and now GokuYama? You got me into two of my favorite ships EVER.
I really need to go read more of this. *dives into reborn pile* |