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Yodori
2008-06-09
ch 1,
abuseabsolutely loved it!
Pseudo Girl
2008-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Wednesday.

Silent treatment lifted.

However.

Gokudera only speaks Italian."

that was halrious! Good Job!
jam2599
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI've read a few 8059 fanfiction stories, but yours is the only one that really captures their personalities, or at least, how I see Gokudera and Yamamoto and how I would expect them to act in a relationship--the conflicted, aggressive, insecure Gokudera, and the gentle, patient, loving Yamamoto.

I thought Yamamoto's thoughts of being Italian/mafioso, and liking Italian things, and also his admission that he would enjoy communication with Gokudera even if it was in Italian, were all pretty funny.

This was a very sweet story, with enough humor and sexiness to bring interest beyond what would be found in a "sappy story" but also more realistic and responsible than the "Yamamoto screwing Gokudera into the floor" stuff on .
Mahon
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseTsk tsk, those crazy heaters.
ummduckie
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseuh, ill most likely be reading this over and over again, i liked it so much. you are excellent. i dont know what to say other than i love love love loved it, and thanks ^^;
AngolMoaChan
2008-03-12
ch 1,
abuseakjfsdkjghklsjfd *FLAIL*

I feel the need to bow down to you right now. First DeiTobi and now GokuYama? You got me into two of my favorite ships EVER.

I really need to go read more of this. *dives into reborn pile*
Ashen Phoenix
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseReally loved this. The dynamics between Gokudera and Yamamoto are as sharp as I've ever read; fantastic, surprising, touching, and all around hilarious. A perfect ten, from my standpoint.
saccharine sin
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseI ... I love this. It's equally realistic and adorable. But the beginning ... wow, that was HOT. And I literally laughed out loud when I read "THIS BUSH IS CRAMPED TO THE EXTREME." Best. Line. Ever. Amazing job.

~Leila*
keelhaul lizzie
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuse**, I love this pairing. I love how Yamamoto was so gentle and so... Yamamoto-ish, and Gokudera was so ridiculously reticent and yet... mmf, I don't know. This was brilliant. ♥
Suimu
2008-01-11
ch 1, anon.
abusecame over from a fic rec at the khr comm. ... wow. just wow.

dkfjadklfj you've successfully converted me into 8059 XD. this fic is just perfect... PERFECT.
gina-neko-chan
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuse"THIS BUSH IS CRAMPED TO THE EXTREME" will forever and always be my favorite Ryohei fic-line EVER. I just want to IM that to a friend randomly and see the reaction.

Anywho...

WHO more YamaGoku from sharingank! That makes me SO FREAKIN' HAPPY that I'm having a hard time thinking straight.

Drunk and hung over Yamamoto was awesome. "I'm serious. I think I'm dying." XD PRICELESS.

Everyone was very in character. Loved it!
Streets of Fire
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseMlargh...gnahh...glrh
I am incoherent in my love for that story. You are a master.
dawnreader
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abuseI totally love it
Lady Underworld
2007-12-20
ch 1,
abuseWhat's with only five reviews? This is a good fic. More people should read it. I :heart: Gokudera and Yamamoto's love-hate relationship. :D
Ayumi-tenshi
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseEven if I were to write down all the adjectives I wanted to describe this fic with, it wouldn't be enough.

This is too damn good! xD

And the way you write, man, it's amazing! More so, it's something I can't tell just yet. Let me read this again, and again, and again, and only then I'll be able to tell you what it is.

xD

It's too good, for real.
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