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| The Outlander 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's very good. Excellent, even. I'm writing a story myself, based on information in the game and this complete story from the game can certainly aid me. One thing I found quite disappointing, though, is that you didn't really put a lot of "effort" into the fights, and the description of it. But that's up to you of course, and it's not that many people want that. But still, awesome!! |
| Da Bao 2007-12-09 ch 7, | abuseI believe I now love you! I love Jade Empire so much and it's such a shame there aren't many fictions out there for the game, much less any really great ones. I hope you continue writing for this particular game. Thank you! -Da Bao |
| BleedingLuv 2007-11-30 ch 7, | abusewell done.A very entertaining read.A wonderful companion to one of my favorite games of all time |