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The Outlander
2007-12-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's very good. Excellent, even. I'm writing a story myself, based on information in the game and this complete story from the game can certainly aid me.

One thing I found quite disappointing, though, is that you didn't really put a lot of "effort" into the fights, and the description of it. But that's up to you of course, and it's not that many people want that.

But still, awesome!!
Da Bao
2007-12-09
ch 7,
abuseI believe I now love you! I love Jade Empire so much and it's such a shame there aren't many fictions out there for the game, much less any really great ones. I hope you continue writing for this particular game. Thank you!


-Da Bao
BleedingLuv
2007-11-30
ch 7,
abusewell done.A very entertaining read.A wonderful companion to one of my favorite games of all time
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