beautiful!

This is short, but powerful. I know there are a lot of fics on here dealing with Mark's reaction to his friend's dieing, but this is my probably my favorite. Well done.

It's good i'd like to see more.

It's the shortest piece of writing that's ever made me weep. I'm PMSing, too, so this just killed me. It was very well written. Kudos. But my boyfriend will kick you for making me cry. *glares*

This is he way I always think that Mark would react. I really love RENT, but it always makes me think about the "after", and I think you really got Mark down.

Wow, what a beautiful story! A seriously nice little post for World AIDS Day; it really shows how prevelent AIDS is (even if this was in the AIDS when the American epidemic was at its peak...). Anyway, keep writing!

poor Marky. :(

i want to give him a hug

This is really good, I love how the AIDS virus is affecting him even though he doesn't have it. I would suggest separating it a bit more so it is not in two paragraphs but I still found it easy to read. You really showed the characters well and I would love more RENT fics up on the site from you!

Aww poor Mark! I can imagine him losing all hope! well done!

A friend linked me to this and I'm so glad she did. I cried for Mark, no joke. My heart shattered. I felt his pain. I wanted to hug him. So much emotion is expressed in so little words. I cannot express how much I loved this. Bravo. It has been added to my favorites.