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gslover123 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseenjoyed it!
9ud9ir190ne6ad 2007-12-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was really sweet, i loved it. Cute!
Hamlets-pirate 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abuseOkay. I'm reading and reviewing. Am I an asshat? Oh, it was GREAT. It made me happy and hopeful. I hope it comes true. I loved the comment about the bug up the frozen caveman's ass.
Kaki 2007-12-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseDear Blaspheme; 1st: Seperated is spelled sepArated, with an A, and accredidation is spelled accrediTation, with a T. Maybe before critiquing someone else's writing you should do a spell check. 2nd: I am the Spoons beta, and she has done nothing to upset me nor run me off, I am still very much in contact with her and read everything she writes. I am EXTREMELY proud of the advance of her writing skills, and as such, have told her numerous times that she does NOT need me to beta her work. I'll still do it, mind you, because I like it.. NOT because she needs it. Her writing is from the heart, honest, true and, in my humble opinion, extremely worthy of this site AND of the reviews she gets. For her age, I deem her extremely adept in her writing and am constantly amazed at her worldliness. 3rd: I don't understand why you must feel the need to bash. And also of your need to stay anonymous. If you are a writer of FF, I would be interested in reading the fic you have written and read reviews you have received. Constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome, but you are downright MEAN in some of the things you have said. Makes me wonder why you are so upset at her loyal followers. Why do you care so much? Are you angry you don't get the same kind of response? You are entitled to your opinion, of course, but there is no reason to be nasty about it. 4th: As you have seen from her reviews, and by the number of stories she has written, she does have a 'loyal' following. I don't think everyone likes the same type of story, and I too have found HORRID stories online here, but don't feel the need to bash... I just don't read them. No great loss, I'm sure plenty of people like them, they just aren't for me. I've probably read 10 stories online, with some AWESOME authors that I'm am simply in awe of, from age 15 to 50 (sorry if I missed any ages S) and to have the courage to write and post and put yourself out there, is a compliment in itself. I applaud everyone who gives it a shot! Please feel free to contact me at my email if you wish, and I'll tell you even more of my feelings for my 'adopted' long-distance, fiction-writer daughter... because I'm extremely proud of her and THRILLED she looks to me to review/edit her work. PS.. I didn't spell check or 'beta' my note, its just straight from the heart. As Always, Kaki (or Momma, to special ones) G
Blaspheme 2007-12-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou should have let it continue to poke you, in my opinion. I'm not saying that it is not a good story, I am only saying that I do wish that you perhaps would have shared it with one of your so-called friends from this site so that they may have written it better. May I ask what ever happened to your beta? The woman did help you magnanimously at times in your writings, and I beg you to find her again. Bury whatever problems may have seperated you two and embrace her skills once more, please. How it is that someone could miss such simple things is beyond me. Why is it that people flock to you? I see so many reviews to your stories, and none of them do anything but praise you for your 'fine' work. While your fans hold you in such high regards, I sit back in my chair and wonder to myself why people can write horrid things, post them, and get nothing but love for it, all while there are authors out there with true talent and skill, true love for what it is that they produce, who get only half the accredidation that you do. The world is simply a place a never-ending wonders, isn't it? The title? The summary? Please, don't get me started, especially since you did not even have the skill or respect for your own tale to come up with one of them on your own. When you decide to write and post again, please do it with the characters, fans, and just other readers in general in your head. Not all of your writing should be such OOC travesties of the mind.
Invisible Evidence 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseI should first of all tell you that, because no-one else ever updates good stories, I pretty much only login for you. and now on with the review.. "But what’s Heaven got on Sara Sidle? Not. A. Damn. Thing." I couldn't agree more. this was kinda cute sad, a little, but cute as all hell. x3 I love it. It's getting favourited. Loves Ya, Loser -Rosie. P.S I didn't read this with my English teacher, I forgot when she was there. Shame...
The Queen of Sin 2007-12-03 ch 1,	abusepokepokepokepokepokepoke AWESOME DOOD! That's a really cool idea...your head is amazing...and ...ahem...yeah...my eyes ARE up here...ahem... and cookies are on there way to you for this uber-cool fic...
GRISSOM LOVER 07 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abusegreat job
RenLissa 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abuseDopey is good. I also dream of the day she'll come back. I liked the flow of the story. Thanks for the dopey pick me up on a Sunday morning.
LapsusStili 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abusesigh This was a nice way to start my morning - a little GSR happiness. Nicely done. And I just loved the line: "Even if he was in Greenland pulling a bug out of a caveman’s frozen ass, she could get in touch with him."
BrookeGreene 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseI know what happens if I don't reveiw. It's simple, you virtually kick my ass. 'Specially since I promised to reveiw this one. So what was that thing you said about not being able to write anymore? That's so not true, and totally proved by this. I'm glad I saved this to read now. It was awesome dude, and I loved the whole repetition thing you had going on. And guess what? We have almost 3 inches of snow (it's 7cm), which is a hell of a lot for us, and it's still snowing steadily!
PiperG 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseI loved it. My fave part was Fucking Moron. My late brother in law, who NEVER said a bad word, said that in the middle of some bad ass traffic one day and I laughed so hard I thought I'd pass out! I can totally see Grissom calling himself that, whether he would SAY it or not. Great idea, loved the "dream" thing. Original and Lovely. Keep up the great work. We'll have tons to write about WHEN Sara comes home to her bugman. I can't wait. Damned strike. Thanks again for a great story.
TDCSI 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseYeah so, like I said last night, I really like it. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Especially when I'm studying chemistry with Jessica, lost track of time so I called Beth to see if I needed to do chores, she said no. And wouldn't you know it, fifteen minutes later, Orin calls to rip me a new one. About what, beats the hell out of me. It was something about a few of the horses outside were out of water and heaven forbit he had to put enough in to get them through the night. I told him I normally watered on Sunday since I have a messed up schedual on Monday's and with 2 big ass tests going down, I wanted more time to study. So, whatever, sorry to use your review to rant, I'll shut up now and get back to my chemeistry. But, yeah, it was good.
SaraLou 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseKeeping the scottish for the next time - but I liked this...An interesting insight to Grissom!
theyHAUNTme 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseThis didn't suck...it's amazing, as always!!:) Keep up the good work...and post something funny, will ya!! I need a laugh!:) Well done with this one.

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