Wow, this was good; I loved it. Poor Sarah...

Angelica (:

This was very interesting, a "Shirley temple"huh. just one question, you got a story that follows after this? I am now invested in this to see what chuck would do if he found out, about that maneuver.

Well done--sensous without being too graphic--which was right for this. I can see you worked hard, and it paid off. So sad for Chuck, but he's a gentleman, and hopefully it won't be forever that he has to wait for an encore...

this is really great, thanks for writing it :)

Aw, I enjoyed this piece. The characters seemed spot on. I hope you write some more Chuck stuff!

That was pretty good, and the reader can really feel as Sarah struggles through the whole thing. She's not really involved with Chuck for this to ring too true to her but she isn't totally detached either. There are a couple of grammatical errors here and there you might want to look into.

Nice. I'm new to the Chuck-verse but like your style.

I liked it! The Casey line at the and had me laughing a lot.

It was ok. But I don't exactly get what a Shirley Temple is.

Wow. Rough fic that fits into a darker corner of the Chuck-verse. It's completely plausible from Sarah's POV- especially now that she's probably angrier at Chuck since "Chuck vs. The Nemesis". Well written if light on the other character stuff (but I understand that was the point ). I'd like to see what you could do with the other characters- Ellie, or perhaps a solemn Morgan. Thanks for this!!