Very interesting view of an older, redeemed Dudley, still trying to make up for his past. I'd definitely expect him to put more effort into it than Harry, and you've written that well. I also like how you've written Harry's treatment of Dudley - standoffish, somewhat cold, and slightly awkward. Well done.

tht was sweet i really liked it...i've always thought dudley turned around =-]

This was an interesting take on things. Bid D sounds so...MATURE! haha, but very believeable. Kudos!

Wow. I love Dudley. Maybe that's actually what he'll become. Sigh... one can only hope. :). Well done.

please dont end it there. i really loved this story. i love how it was written. you did a great job. later dude

nice little scene!

Hehehe. The Dark Lord Voltaire...
Nice fic!

Oh my gosh! You should write the dinner that they have with Dudley's family! It would be so awesome, especially since Harry has to make sure his kids don't accidentally do magic! PLEASE write it - this was good, I want more! Or if you did when Dudley goes to see Harry at work, and he's surrounded by all those tiny signs of magic, and if they asked for his wand for examination or something... So much potential! I'll put you on author alert in hopes that you'll continue!
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Is it finished? Will there be more? Please say yes?

wow! this was an interesting plot. I really enjoyed reading this, good fic! Who would have thought that Duddly would have turn into somthing like that? well.. we DID see him thank Harry in the seveth book... kind of... but still, it was good. Nice work!

nicely done :-) It was appropriately sweet and awkward, like I would have imagined

Interesting fic. I like reading about Harry and Dudley's interaction especially after the way they parted in DH. Great work--nice to see a change in Big D. ;)

This was a very interesting piece. I loved the details and the POV, those really set it apart from other, similar stories. Also, they way you described Dudley was quite unique and less "tell" and more "show", a hard talent to find in fanfiction writers. Thank you for posting and sharing this lovely one-shot, though you have me longing for me, so please keep up the good work! ^^ Take care! =)

~Lily~

Nice, changed but not too much... but Voltaire! with his job he should know better... but it was funny! :-)
Ciao!

i love it