OMG! Yes, you updated! I love 'Thrown to the Front Lines' and 'Countdown of the Ancients'…I was a little worried you woudn't keep going with the continuation ,but you did, which is super awesome…and is Skywarp getting the warm and fuzzies for Rachel? Jazz better watch himself…the sexy seeker is on the loose.

Wow! It is fantastic, since I began to read it I could not stop.

YOU!
*glomp*

I wasn't sure before, but i am now... skywarp likes rachel. aw. not that i'm cheering for him or anything. my jazzy wins all. heh. But it's still cute. :D

Really great update! I especially liked the fact it was a long read. Can't wait to see the next part!

Yay! I am quite pleased to see Stealthshadow again, even if it is only in dream form. And that dream was quite powerful. Nice to see how much Skywarp cares for Rachel, and how she might care for him. I am very eager to see the Seekers' reactions to meeting Kestral in the flesh. I am also very happy to see TC again. He totally rocked. After around half a year, it is definitely nice to see another installment.

Here we go! It's never a good sign when all coms are lost. Rachel and the Jetfire crew took it better than Jazz - Gah, does he think she's gotten blown up again? I hope not! I did enjoy his response to the bug and his instruction to all of us on how to deal with something like that...with style of course =) And I'm dying to know more about what is going on with TC. It sounds like he is about to get another civil war started with him at the center. But I loved how he took out Swindle without even a sonic boom! Lastly, poor Warp and another bad dream...it doesn't bode well for Rachel. I wonder if their "visions" change as the future changes due to their actions, or if they are constantly evolving? Either way, I'm thrilled to see an update, and eager as always to read more!

Nice chapter. I'm curious what Skywarp's dreams mean. The communications black out is very suspicious, and I can't remember enough to know if Kestral is new or old or to be trusted. :) Still enjoyed it!

yeah you updated
thought you werent gonna keep going
wow that was scary I thoguht Rachel was really dead

you finally updated it.

this was very good.

I really hope Rachel or Will doesn't die.

Have now read all of this so far and i love it! Love the way Sunny is so protective of her and i think Warp will start being more so, hope she doesn't barf in his cockpit,lol! Interesting way of bringing in Will too. Mega-kudos for writing such a gripping, innovative story!

You made me cry! :( Between all the dialogue and the utter sadness between Jazz and Rachel at being separated again, well, I let loose a few tears. It takes a very good writer to force tears. Congratulations on writing a chapter that was one of the most emotionally-involved that I've read.

The plot continues to thicken and although I'm happy to see that Starscream is finally getting a bit of happiness, all of the utter crap is about to hit the fan back on Earth and Rachel is still stuck in the middle of things and hasn't even had any time to really spend with Jazz before she is haring off on yet another mission.

BTW, the double-takes that the soldiers were doing in trying to figure out how Rachel was Jazz's "girl" were hilarious. I'm sure that the issue will come up again in the future and that it will cause some conflict.

Great update!

Love it!

Yay! If Skywarp now has a Cybertronian alt form, could he carry a human? I kind of figured that cockpits were more for sensor housings rather than a place for someone to sit and fly a plane. Since everyone is making a fuss about 'Warp's new form, maybe an extremely rough sketch could help us out? If you have time. Other than that, I liked seeing the humans' reactions and how everyone is doing in the post aftermath stuff.

Have I told you lately that I love you? Haha This was great! I was so happy to see that you'd updated your story. I must say that I absolutely love how the characters and their relationships become more developed with each chapter. I especially loved seeing Rachel's transformation. She is hands-down my favorite OC ever. I was laughing at her trying on the huge space suit. XD

I can't wait to read about the Mars mission!

Very nice, I love Rachel and Jazz's relationship