Awesome end to this story! I was waiting for Gibbs to remind Tony that he had value and a family and loved him and would miss him if he died. You sure didn't disappoint. I always hate to see your stories come to an end and this story was no different. Great job!

Another great chapter! Somehow I don't think Gibbs is going where Tony thinks he is.

Well I hope Ziva's attempt to cheer Tony up is better than McGeek's attempt. I love the way Gibbs noticed that Tony said he ordered food not what he ate. Gibbs is so on to the subtle nuances that Tony uses to deflect. Great job on this - can't wait to read the next chapter~

I love how well Gibbs knows Tony - and how quickly he figured the significance of the death of the goldfish. Looking forward to reading more.

Great start to this story - after that last line I can't wait to read more. Looking forward to finding out just what is wrong with Tony.

*glares*
I hate you
*sniffels*
You made me cry! ;)
Well written :)

bummer, by now that answer isn't as funny as before anymore ;)
Wonder what Ziva has in mind :)

"My Goldfish died" lol! love that answer ;)

very nice story... I could see this as an episode, or part of an episode. nicely done

This was absolutely amazing. Very nicely done! I am spending days reading your fics one after the other and am so enjoying them all. You have an amazing talent, and I'm so glad I stumbled across your fic. Your characters are true to form, the emotions are real and palpable and I can picture it all in my head. Please keep sharing your talent with us!

Bobbie

Read the two stories they were good.

Poor Tony...He is so complicated...And so hurt...But in my opinion he one of the most likable characters in TV series...thank you for this wonderful story...

poor Tony...Loosing Kate's gift is like loosing Kate once more...Thank you for this story once more...

I've read this story more than once but I have failed to review it...I really loved this story ...it's really original and I always love to read about Tony nad Gibbs...Much more than I enjoy reading about Tony and Ziva...Thank you...

Another good one.