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| RoxxiSanders 2008-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseAww, very cute, loved the bit when Danny said that she gave him the world. Huggles x |
| ReJo 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I needed a respite from the angsty one-shot I'm writing. BTW, I love fluff :) Please keep writing it! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseCute very cute... JENNIFER |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseI love it its awesome! |
| Yemam2422 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Their conversation was very impactful despite speaking very few words. I really liked how Lindsay avoided saying the 'l' word but finally did at the end. I also like how Danny initiated the conversation. It was all very sweet. Nice story! |
| Brinchen86 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful, I really loved it, so romantic. I especially loved this: -“The world,” he whispers, his words almost lost in her brown hair. “You gave me the world, and more. You gave me something to believe in, something to hold on, something to live for.” He pauses for a second. “You gave me something to help me get through everything.”- So sweet, so cute! Great work, like always! Huge hugs! |