Reviews for The Empty Grave Part 3: The Mausoleum

Reviews For: The Empty Grave Part 3: The Mausoleum

Harry2 2008-03-07 ch 3,	abuseOH, Palpatine/Sidious, if ONLY you knew! Time has been ruptured, and now, both versions of Vader are in the same time zone! They need to be careful, for if they meet and touch, there is NO TELLING WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN! Now, if I know my Time Lord recollections the Bilimlovitch effect would kick in and then one would be gone! But in the SW universe, there is no telling WHAT might happen!
Dur'id the Druid 2008-01-24 ch 2,	abuseNice. And here I thought Anikin couldn't meet someone like Vadar without one of them not surviveing it.
Lyra Raenes 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseAfter reading your introduction I laughed. I knew a screenwriter and he said almost the exact things you said. The plot could've been so much better if Lucas didn't insist on writing the script himself. My friends and I still amuse ourselves by swooning to "Anakin you're breaking my heart!" in an overly sarcastic manner or by imitating the long drawn out "NO!" Love the story so far though, can't wait for the next chapter!
grd 2008-01-23 ch 2,	abuseThank you for writing more of this excellent tale. I have to agree with your points on how the Order became lazy in so many ways. Loving how confusing Vader is too them and even to Anakin. Looking forward to Padme meeting them both.
Harry2 2008-01-23 ch 2,	abuseThis is going to be one WILD ride you have set to be on! Anikan and Vader going at it, and seeing that neither the Jedi NOR the Sith are totally correct! It takes a BALANCE of the two for true harmony to exist and that is what he is trying to teach! This is going to be a VERY bitter pill for both sides to swallow!
Tombadgerlock 2008-01-23 ch 2,	abuseyosh! Glad to see this updated, as i really like the premise, and it's not too shabbily written either :D Good work with your later vader, though i am surprised he didn't try to heal himself !
Dur'id the Druid 2007-12-08 ch 1,	abuseGood to see this going again!
Dirbatua 2007-12-05 ch 1,	abusedamn you for that teaser, so many possibilitys, so little time to fantasise XD, i agree with your speach bout plot holes though
Harry2 2007-12-02 ch 1,	abuseI have only one thing to say: MORE! WE WANT MORE!
mwjen 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseThrilled to see that you are completing this series. Looking forward to more.
grd 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseThis is incredible and needed. Thank you for writing such an amazing tale. The start of the first series seemed unlikely but you've captivated me with your tale.
Tombadgerlock 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseNo...need...more. Excellent teaser, but that's all it is. And, yeah, i agree, the episode three was way too simpathetic to the emperor and the whole clone thing was a WTF.

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