I love this oneshot and how everything Lara thinks about can be applied to both Kurtis as well as Karel. Your style of writing is amazing! This goes straight to my favs :)

You know I have a habit of reading reviews. When I came across this one I was like, "I didn't review it?" -is ashamed-

It's amazing how much similarities you could find between Kurtis and Karel,like "Pointing a gun at his chest"

Now, after reading Akkon's review I feel I'm missing something. Does that 'K' have more meaning apart from being the first part of their names?

Write more...

Pash xx

I love this oneshot. Love the style (surprise, surprise), the pace, the "reading between the lines" it allows, the ambiguity. Friend or foe? Well, we all know what *you* think, but somehow I sense that Miss Croft doesn't quite share your opinion, this time. Hehehe...

Look, I found a new thing to love: the world going bright with shock. Don't know why, but something in that formulation strikes me as wonderfully exact.
Still, my favorite sentences remain the same as before: "She doesn't see a thing. This doesn't surprise her in the slightest, nor is it remotely reassuring." Makes me sigh with satisfaction.

OK, where are those changes? Wild guess, but... did her eyes gleam in the darkness before? Yes? Right, wait... *puts her whole stash of ducky chips on the table* All in, then: before, the letter wasn't "simply signed" but the last sentence was just the "K"
*sweats*
Drat, I always was a crappy poker player.

Nicely done! Mysterious and character driven, great stuff.

It's been a while since I read this though - how come you reposted? Did you change anything? If so, it wasn't anything major so I probably missed it. XD

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: this is quite possibly the cleverest TR fanfic out there. Go, Jordy! :)