|Reviews for My Hero, The Undertaker|
| takerfan925 11/20/10 . chapter 4
Being a tad or more so overweight,I so get where Carly is coming I think its cute,them rooming together,sniping at each healthy,b/c this way if she can stand his mouth an give it back like she has been,they both get rid of their anger an can get to the business of falling in love;he stops being so pissed at this Layla-chick,an she gets over this Greg-dude,its a win-win situation,I think.
| takerfan925 11/20/10 . chapter 3
On the one hand,I can see why she doesn't want to room with him,but on the other,this is Taker we're talkin' about in their right mind or their left one for that matter would turn him down? Not 'less they were completely NUTS! An I don't think Carly is.
| takerfan925 11/20/10 . chapter 2
I'm back,can't stay away,fromth' man,but you know how that you descriptions of Batista,Triple H and Stephanie,an Taker of under his radar,yeah, right,I give that notion all of five 't know if you know it or not an for future reference,Batista has gone MMA/Strike Force and Taker is a BIG fan of was a fight in,I think Vegas or somewhere an Lesnar was on the card,they exchanged words,well Taker did,it was like "You wantin' t'go?" An Lesnar just kinda sorta glared at him,but Taker just looked at him,like you feelin' froggy,then jump"Rumor:Batista will be taking on Bobby Lashley jn his first ,we got to learn to tolerateMMA.
| takerfan925 11/20/10 . chapter 1
I couldn't resist the first chapter of this one Question,where do you come up with these dynamite ideas? One more in "Imperfect Match/Mark's Story" why was the little one,um,Ozee always callin' Mark "Lexi"?
| tophersmommy06 1/4/09 . chapter 17
i love all your storys this one was awesome
| Undertaker's HellRider 8/22/08 . chapter 1
It's me again. Haha. I just had to say that I was just cracking up that your lead girl is Carley (I'm a Carly as well). And honestly her description is everything I am, all the way to the 5'4 height.
| Omega Reid 6/25/08 . chapter 17
I've read a bunch of your fics before and am reading your current one, Almost Paradise, but just noticed this one. It's currently 5:15am and I have been reading non-stop for the last few hours wanting to get it in before going to bed.
I can now have lovely dreams after your wonderful story.
| DevilsScorpio 6/5/08 . chapter 17
Seriously honey, I'm a little teary eyed right now as I finished this one. It was so great and beautiful. Right now, you are my hero!
| Izumi K 5/24/08 . chapter 17
Ok, that was super cute. Especially with the whole, "Sugar… Let's get hitched" bit.
| Ripper de la Blackstaff 4/4/08 . chapter 17
Wow, it's a great story !
I love the Undertaker very much, and even if it wasn't him, I would have loved your story too. It's fresh, funny, your writing style is very pleasant to read, and you OC for once, isn't a Mary-Sue !
| TheRealKellyAnne 3/2/08 . chapter 17
I just sat and read the entire 17 chapters in one sitting. This has got to be one the best stories I have read on FF in a long time. I loved it! You are a talented writer. Very inspiring. Love the romance to it all. It was a pleasure to read.
| littleone999 1/10/08 . chapter 17
ok i swear to god you are my new favorite author! i read this story this afternoon and couldn't believe how it sucked me in! congratulations on such a great story!
| Blackstar1979 1/10/08 . chapter 17
Great story as perusual
This story wins the title for best and funniest fights ever.
| XTahliaX 1/5/08 . chapter 17
AW what an awesome ending! hehe he loves her! i love the way he's just made all the plans and left her out of it! Great chapter and story! love it!
| XTahliaX 1/5/08 . chapter 16
AW, oh no, he better not do something stupid! I can't think of something more hurtful for her, shes totally head over heals for him and he just wants her as a lover...Damn thats nasty! Great chapter