col!
tis a bit sad dat Grey dided...though!! sad...*grabs a tissuese!!*

ain't wait until next chapter

Oh my GOD! This story is amazing and I hope that you post another chapter. Man, finally, an amazing Hein and Aki fanfic!

Ooh, I love this! Please post more chapters soon, this looks so promising and I can't wait to see what happens next. You have everyone wonderfully in-character too. Keep up the good work and please continue (don't make me beg...)!

Since "Salvation" was started waaaaay after "Lonely Hearts," I feel kinda guilty... Anyway, I don't think the ending's bad. I like the bit with his coat. Okay, so I can't really see him getting all protective like that, but who knows... maybe Hein's actually a big softie!

Good.

I like you, that was very good.

Uh, can I have my cookie now?

I can't wait to see where this one is going. Way to go, Ntrophi! I think you've handled Hein very well. And you seem to be adapting to the non-comedic genres admirably.

*sniff* So sad! Poor Aki-chan and Hein-kun! I love those two! Keep up the great work! Gotta read yer other stuff now! ^_^

Aaah! This was so sad! It looks like I'm not the only one who can see who Hein really is. Actually, a lot of people are like us in that way. Anyway, great story. Really. The angst is wonderful.

Nice so far, and you made it easy to depict the characters, gives me a mental image of everything in the fic. Basicaly what this review really means is WRITE MORE.

Oh wow,,this is good..Those last couple of lines just tore my heart out! Looking forward to the next chapter.