very cute, jussy wussy! your my most favorite wittil uncle!

(mwahaha! never call me Rae Rae online again!):(

anyway, i agree with ur other reviews. it did go fast... you need more detail! And take your time! It's not a race...

this went too quickly. slow the it down a bit. Looking forward to the sequel.

feels like your moving along pretty fast.

a little short. felt like you didn't know where it was going. i like the topic though. Keep writing!