|Reviews for The Stray|
| R.N.Taylor 4/6/08 . chapter 1
very cute, jussy wussy! your my most favorite wittil uncle!
(mwahaha! never call me Rae Rae online again!):(
anyway, i agree with ur other reviews. it did go fast... you need more detail! And take your time! It's not a race...
| GriffinRose 12/26/07 . chapter 4
this went too quickly. slow the it down a bit. Looking forward to the sequel.
| GriffinRose 12/17/07 . chapter 3
feels like your moving along pretty fast.
| GriffinRose 12/7/07 . chapter 1
a little short. felt like you didn't know where it was going. i like the topic though. Keep writing!