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Is that it?
No, that can't be it!
I WON'T LET THAT BE IT!
Update soon, or I will forget all about this story and never leave nice reviews again. Thats a promise.
yay!!
It was a very nice story. I enjoyed it.
Val

okay yea I know it was a long note... but you know how I said how late it was?... well I had to do a post on lj so I was up for like another 2 hours! STUPID JOEY!

anyways... that was cute! weally cute! *giggle*

I love this story PLease UPDATE SOON!

Is it showtime bedroom style is his gift looks like it at the end of the story huh keep it up it's still GREAT

:D Great chapter!! Mini Golf is SO fun! So are amusement parks...I just went to one, and didn't get home till like 1 in the morning!! And Joey did make a whole story with her beta note...but, you gotta love her anyways!!:)

Can't wait till you update!

This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I loved it!

I love this story. Excellent and entertaining. I can't wait for the next part.

that was very romantic...he is doing well in "starting over", and I think Sara is responding nicely...so, hurry up and update already, these two are going to have to get :indoors: soon so they don't get too burnt from the heat!...great story...

wow...I so love a take charge Grissom...tomorrow is just on the horizon...he better not mess this up...still worried about a lurking behind the scenes Hank...great chapter...

sigh...a protective Grissom is a wonderful sight to behold...and now, her hero...he better not take it back tomorrow...if he just lets his feelings show, Sara WILL be alright...great chapter...

LOVING the fic :D New chapter soon please? thankyou

I hope you continue this soon! Its really good!

great chapter. hopefully we can get another in less time?! haha

loved it!
plz update soon!!