 HyperCaz 2008-04-26 . chapter 5wow... i think I like this. o_O |
 dahan 2007-12-04 . chapter 5Short chapters, ARG!! :p
I do remember Cole actually, both from the ep and from your other fic fifi.
Now that he's back I hope we get to know him. (please?) ^_^ |
 sparklyshimmer2010 2007-12-04 . chapter 5interesting!
now what they are up to makes sense! the chair and cosole!
yeah, carson and chuck!
anyway... :)
id like to get to know this cole better.
nice ending. |
 sparklyshimmer2010 2007-12-04 . chapter 4oh! hes alive now! "Something that she was supposed to be here to cut up."
*shivers*
no we dont want him to die again! lol
and we also have the story with teyla.
good chap. |
 dahan 2007-12-04 . chapter 4Wah, didn't see that coming...
Wow, what kind of chain jerking story is this?!
By the way, the shot chapters are kind of killers fifi. :p |
 dahan 2007-12-04 . chapter 3Hm, this might be a little beyond what I can get. I get that there's an indirect play about Cole no longer being around, but the effect might be too subtle for me to get.
Oh well, onto the next chap! |
 sparklyshimmer2010 2007-12-03 . chapter 3a bit of an odd story, but its nice.
nice chap. poor carson. and whats up w/ chuck?
i await the next chap! |
 dahan 2007-12-02 . chapter 2Hmm, are multiple stories going on at once here?
This is curious. Guess I got to wait for the next update. ^_^ |
 sparklyshimmer2010 2007-12-02 . chapter 2woah! now that was interesting! |
 dahan 2007-12-01 . chapter 1Wow, this is a change of pace fifi. A bit of a departure from your usual style and story (in my opinion at least). Oddly enough if anything it resembles your "Fated". Pretty neat.
You've done much justice to Heightmeyer I think, and I really do like your play against her with Shep on this topic. Looking forward to seeing the rest of it. ^_^ |