Excellent story! Keep up the good work!

I like your story. It's very interesting. please update soon ^^

OK fabulous work . The story is coming along great. Keep it up I can hardly wait for the next chapter . Please email when chapter up OK.

Little off topic--but what are the names of the books you've read with pianists in them?

Wow the sroy just got intense. And no you haven't lost your touch on writing just to let you know. You're an awesome writer. Update soon this stroy rocks!

You must update soon again okay? Thank you so much :P

Mokuba died?! NO! How? more soon please!=3

Don't worry about the long wait in between chapters. Your chapters always makes up for it since your writing is really awesome^_^ Even if this was a short chapter it was great. I wonder if Anzu is going to tell Yami what Kaiba said to her or if she'll try to make him go away since his parents wants to go and kill him. I think it's cruel of his parents to want to kill him but I know he'll have to make it out of it some how. I just know it. Update Soon!^_^

nice update soon things are getting very interesting

Of course you haven't lost your touch!
I was actually thinking while reading this, gosh your Kaiba reminds me of your Kaiba from every story I've read of yours--which is great, continuity is something you should strive for--and again, I liked each scene in this chapter, it was a good refresher for all the 'rising action' that's been happening in recent chapters! Its almost information overload but you handle it really nicely.
Again, I think you did a great job moving the plot along yet without revealing too much. I really liked Anzu and Kaiba's conversation the best--have to say that I hate that he's a smoker here, seems so out of character in my opinion--but there were some good lines and good reactions. Love that she got his card at the end, I have a feeling she's going to need it. :)
Loved this chapter, and I hope to read more from you soon. This story has got so much potential, and I can tell it really is going somewhere (not like its already so awesome, because it is) and I can't wait to read what happens next!

Sakuta Takanouchi

thanx .. a nice and good chappy ..
it become like a horror movie ( scared )
then yami is a fugitive with no home .. it's a horrible life
it's not strang that he is suicidal .. but it's strang that kaiba is friendly ( my poor seto .. it's not my fault that you are careless in a lot story ) but i happy that he is a good man in here .. take care of yami for me seto ( blink )
this chapter was deep .. you explained situation very good and believe dear , it was very horrible situation .. i hope yami's parrent find him because then story become complicated and yami fall in troble and sorry yami but i love when you are in trouble ( and injured too )
my lovely insane sprit thanx for this lovely chapter.. go on and update soon because it is very hard for me that wait for next one .. please update very soon

You sound like me--strapped for time. I'll keep this short for both of us.

YAY!! I am so happy to see that you are still working on this piece. It's my favorite one out the ones that you have going on right now. Please keep up the great work!

Specifically this chapter, I loved the humor in the dialogue where Malik swears, especially the part where he says, "It gives my speech some ** flavor."

Excellent chapter, as always. Love your writing style and character development. Please update soon!

I'm glad I've found (and you have offered) another one of your works for me to adore and squee over *u* I'm so happy you decided to add Mark xD I think he fits well and alsso.. Your comment about kissing you do some of the sexiest, passionate, vivid kisses I have read! I adore them! Lulz I like atem/yami x anzu too. Bravo!! Look forward to more again! I'm such a fan >0<

I hope whatever drama life has been throwing at you clears up, and I can't wait for your glorious return with new chapters!