|Reviews for The Notes Of My Heart|
| CraziAznGirl 3/6/10 . chapter 22
With the beginning of this chapter starting off with Jounouchi, it was quite depressing.
"No," he mumbled to himself, "that's all a lie."
I just gushed so much at that line! He's telling himself all these stuff that he's assuming, yet he still has enough sense to know it's not true. lovelovelove *-* !
| CraziAznGirl 3/6/10 . chapter 21
The very last line in this chapter made me go "wtf D;".
Yami's parents are after him? That's something I would've never guessed.
I love the amount of intelligence Kaiba has. He puts it to good use, no doubt. It makes me wonder, does Kaiba actually care? I just find it interesting that he's confiding to Anzu about everything and telling her to be more cautious.
| CraziAznGirl 3/6/10 . chapter 20
I love the beginning of this chapter where Mai and Anzu have their girl-to-girl conversation. But then everything else after that scene went by very slowly. I wasn't exactly sure why until I read your little note at the end where you said this chapter was kind of like a filler. xD
& I find that the insight on Yami's and Malik's past together was a nice thing to learn about. I guess it can help fill some holes when pertaining to those two.
| SwordMasterZ 3/2/10 . chapter 23
| DaAmazingMeepers 2/26/10 . chapter 23
Aww, poor Rena! And poor Yami!TT-TT You like to torture your characters, don't you? More soon please!3
| yami yasi 2/23/10 . chapter 23
thanx dear ... it was nice like ever .. just it was short ... .. i love long chapter ...
and yami's part was short too .. please write about him more and if you add more action scene in story .. it will be better much more .. thanx again .. update soon dear
| port rocks 2/22/10 . chapter 23
i don't really care muhc just as long you up date asp.
oh when is another Yami and Tea lover seen again comes up?
| coolzonegurl 1/31/10 . chapter 22
Hey, I just realized that I had not posted a review on this fic since I started reading it. I know how rude it is and how much authors/authoress value their reviews. So please accept my apology.
Firstly, I was quite amazed at this fic. Seeing as you are not a very big fan of this pairing and from a few of your other fics, you made fun of Atem quite a bit. Despite that, you have nailed each character perfectly. So kudos to you on that.
Your plot is moving smoothly. I was, at one point, wondering when Yami would actually break through his protective barrier with Anzu and take the first step with her. Your writing of that scene was completely out of the blue and unexpected. It was just after Seto warned Yami not to involve himself with Anzu. And yet I enjoyed it. Like you said, in real life romances do not happen in a flash (not the exact quote from you but somewhat the same meaning, rite?).
Now, back to the story:
I know that Seto's supposed to be in charge of Yami's finances but is that really enough reason for him to even butt into his love life? Why does he care so much about Yami's well-being? I thought they hated each other. Maybe you did mention his reasons but if you did it wasn't strong enough a reason for Seto to do so, IMO. Or...do you have something up your sleeve?
I was waiting for a while now for Yuugi to appear. Is he not going to be in your fic? Maybe as Yami's younger brother or something, shielded away from the underworld and oblivious to his parents' evil deeds? Or is Yami's just a poor lonely single child that did not share the love and joy of having another sibling? (I'm being melodramatic here)
I'm really excited to read what Anzu's next move is. Whether she will shy away from this dark and dangerous man that Yami is or stand on her own two feet and face her problems like a real...woman(?)How is her decision going to affect her relationship with Yami? Now that they have JUST started on it and all.
Don't go hating on Mai! She's been through a lot. Really hope that she and Jou will be able to patch things up with their relationship. Rena needs a happy family to grow up with.
I absolutely love how you put Malik in as the good guy. Not many fics have this element. I don't find him weird in the plot either. I vote for him to stay! His relationship with Ryou is so sweet. Like they are the closest of friends though they will never admit. And I'm talking about pure friendship here. Nothing to do with Yaoi!
Anyways, I hope this gives you enough inspiration to continue this fic. PLEASE don't leave it hanging here!
| Arana Is 1/28/10 . chapter 22
My favorite part was the conversation with Seto and Anzu. Their relationship or lack of has a lot chemistry, and it's fun to read. I think I've told this before, but you write Seto extremely well. I did find remembering Yami's back story a bit confusing, but that's because I haven't read this story in a very long time.
I like Jou's part as well. He was in character, and his relationship with Mai seems the most realistic of all the couples.
| tenten93 1/2/10 . chapter 22
Hee! Can't wait for the next chap! This is such a good story.. I love all the different relationships in here, and that you don't focus on one couple for an extended amount of time. Great story, and I'm excited to see the next chapter! :)
| dragonheart01 12/12/09 . chapter 3
Excellent story! Keep up the good work!
| Lisa 11/15/09 . chapter 22
I like your story. It's very interesting. please update soon
| Koragirl 11/11/09 . chapter 22
OK fabulous work . The story is coming along great. Keep it up I can hardly wait for the next chapter . Please email when chapter up OK.
| LilyMaple 11/8/09 . chapter 22
Little off topic-but what are the names of the books you've read with pianists in them?
| Lakota Firestorm 11/2/09 . chapter 22
Wow the sroy just got intense. And no you haven't lost your touch on writing just to let you know. You're an awesome writer. Update soon this stroy rocks!