Loved how you captured the different voices, especially Carolines. She is so great and really puckish...

Thats funny.

Well written, I love it :)

aw very cute. loved booth's especially, and his ideas about how their first kiss wold happen, not that he had thought about it *winkwink* :) great job.

Aw I missed it! That was great and funny! I love the puckish Caroline part! :-)

Loved the 3 points of view! Great job :)

wow. im planning to read the entire thing, but i just wanted to let you know how much i loved this first chapter. booth's reaction and thoughts are perfect, and i love the way everything matches up with what actually happened in the episode. great job!

You did a really awesome job with the Booth's POV. The line "But it’s not as if I’ve thought about it a lot." definitely got a laugh. I usually don't enjoy things written in the present tense but this was so well done that I really didn't notice.

Cheers! :)

Anna

that was well written. POV is one of my favorite ways to interpret a situation and you achieved this wonderfully. Good work!

That was perfect! You captured everyone's personality very well. Very cute and well done! :]

I'd say you nailed Caroline's voice, right there. Brilliant.

WoW perfect

he he hee he this great!

Horay for being Puckish!

AWESOME.