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| MochaCocaFan 2008-09-10 ch 1,  | abuse... |
| nadakesgurl 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusewow. i enjoyed this story very much :) |
| Love and Rock Music 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. Awesome. I have no words. Great job! |
| EmptyWord 2007-12-31 ch 1, | abuseOh my goodness, the intensity of this... It really stands as a testament to what marvels words can create. Amazing, amazing job. Good use of parentheses. :) |
| TheFifthArm 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWow... I must say, this story had driven me to post my first review on I love that it's simple, and short. I love how you've captured Elle's voice and I especially love where the story goes. It seems like such a fitting ending. Just right. This little piece of fiction is greatly appreciated. I will be sure to check out your other stuff. Thank you. |
| jacedes 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Their relationship is so complicated and fascinating. |
| snafumama 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseGlad to see your story! Fascinating. Adam andd Elle are a storm to be reckoned with. I love your writing style. |
| vmarslovahhh18 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseamazing. i just love elle. |
| PrincessBella24 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. So well written, and in character. I can practialy see it happening. It was beautifil, thanks for this. |
| Prue Winchester 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseWow! I was glue to the computer screen the whole time I read this! It was great! |
| AliBlack 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseCompletely fantastic. Many authors are great writers in the typical sense, but you have a special grasp of style that I truly admire. The characters were spot on, the direction was amazing, but still the style itself is what really gets me. Beautiful, striking, fluid and macabre. 2nd person is probably the most difficult perspective, and it was perfect. Your writing is remarkable and I wish you luck in the future! |
| MustLoveGreg 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseLove it |
| tokara2132 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very fascinating little ficlet (or series of ficlets, really). It is very interesting the way you have the the two characters interact and develop, in their own sick ways. |
| SkewedViolinist 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. I liked this. A lot. Write more like it please! :) -SV |
| TheLostMaximoff 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseGod that was awesome. |