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| sprntrl grl 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseAw, I love Carter - he's one of my favorite characters. Good story! |
| penName111 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseLove it! |
| KCS 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Carter's adorable - never thinking of himself! Well-written and realistic. I love the friendship fics! |
| Glorious Clio 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseAww, poor Carter! I love him. Great characterization, everyone was spot on! And I love the dialogue. And the guys were so nice when they found that he was really hurt. I hearby volunteer to bandage Carter's ribs! |
| smithcrafter 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good, but you could have taken it farther. (Of course, I NEVER think there's enough) There really aren't that many stories that have someone OTHER than Hogan getting hurt. |
| dart53 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseHey I like it. You got the characters just right. Love Carter grousing at himself for being clumsy even if it wasn't his fault. |
| El Gringo Loco 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseA solid foundation. I'm curious as to what the author will build on it. |
| Niente Zero 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseSniffle. Lovely. Great camaraderie and quiet stoicism. Well written. |