 unluckyteddybear13 2009-11-25 . chapter 25god dammit that was good i personally stuck wif ed during the entire process and cried when he cried and almost didn't want to feel his pain... |
 kyoko131 2009-06-06 . chapter 10I really like the story it's cute but I just think that u have too many scences where they cry |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-19 . chapter 25yeah sequalness! i should look into that... |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-19 . chapter 24ok you seriously have to listen to the song 'Pretty Baby' by Vanessa Carlton while reading you're story because the song is perfect for this story! Put the song on repeat or just keep pressing the play button when it ends but it fits! |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-19 . chapter 23oh my god you're going to make me cry! no you can't break them up! NO |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-19 . chapter 17Eds such a woman in this chapter! i love it so funny! lol. |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-18 . chapter 5Ok so i'm listening to the song 'pretty baby' and it's like the perfect song for this chap! I swear i almost cried i got all treary eyed! |
 Xpectashauns 2008-07-26 . chapter 25This has got to be like-what, the 10th time I've read this story again? Of all the fics I have read, this is the one I know I can't remove from my favorites. It was amazing. What more can I say? A sequel would be interesting, but nothing (in my opinion, of course) can compare to this. And I mean it from the bottom of heart in which you have touched w/this fic. |
 darklightgirl005 2008-07-02 . chapter 25I liked this story alot but the only thing, is that Ed should have been more of himself. Yeah-yeah, at times he can be emotional but not at ALL times. That's the only glitch in your story. Ed may SOMETIMES be like that but as far as I'm concerned he doesn't do it much. He sometimes hides his emotions.For example when he's sad he might instead act like he's angry and yell at someone or something. He's usually strong and tries not to break down in front of people. In your story he shows his emotions freely. It's nice to read something this touching though. It could have been better if he and Roy fought more(bickering about height etc.) and Ed acted stubborn and hot-tempered like he usually does.
Once again this was a very good story but... You know the rest.
lol =^-^= |
 Suzuku90 2008-06-29 . chapter 25I, for one, would enjoy a sequel. Unless you've already started on one, which in that case I'll have to check your profile again =3 |
 Ichigo Mizuki 2008-04-24 . chapter 17OH! I almost cried! This is my favorite chapter so far! GOTTA READ THE REST!
...and Casablanca suddenly seems to peak my interest...I've never really given it a shot...hm... |
 sensation-transmutation29 2008-04-22 . chapter 25Absolutely loved it. I have to say, though, I had to laugh at the slight homonym mix-up (waist vs. waste). I had a pretty bizarre picture going through my head until I read the scene again.
But great story! Especially loved Riza's part in it. |
 Blood Scarlet Dark 2008-04-16 . chapter 25Loved it, |
 ketsuekilover 2008-04-13 . chapter 6 so sweet. i loved it. ^_^ |
 misabella 2008-03-10 . chapter 25Definitely one of the most amazingly written stories I've read on this site. I'm definitely hoping for a sequel! |