... Wow. I loved this story too-- and I look forward to the epilogue!

Good luck!

wa it's going to end. this is really a nice story hoping and wanting to read more.hope u update soon and thanks for this chapter good luck and keep up the good work

definitely another thumbs up.awesome I just can't get enough so I'm reading this fic. straight XD.anyway I'll review soon.thanks for this chappie.LOL

XD i keep on smiling while reading your fic. it's awesome with some exciting twists added to it.overall it's great keep it up.

An interesting plot you got here hehe anyway loved it and i'll read and review too.

I can't wait to read your epilogue. I'm very happy that you wrote this story. Once I started I could stop. Hope to read it soon!

NANI!
ATHENA/MAYURA HAS PRIDE!
HUH!
OK OK OK DONT KEEP US IN TH SHADOWS!
UPDATE SOON !
PLEASE!
WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!
EPILOUGE!
ONEGAI UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

kakkoi story , i always loved athena ...

although loki seems a little bit out of character , i still loved it

hey ,why not try colliding jashin loki and athena mayura ? hehe

PLOT TWIST!! I never expected Mayura to sacrifice herself as the last sin, and Pride of all things. Hopefully there is still the slightest chance of a happy ending... right? Please? Great chapter. I look forward to seeing how the epilogue plays out.

AH. Its ending soon~ I cant wait!
Mayura is so sad. ): She will be alright in the end, and be with Loki, right? RIGHT?! Dont give me a sad ending~
Update soon, please.

I was wondering how pride would show up. I did not see that coming AT ALL.

Alright! Mayura kicked Hera's greedy butt! Now the final battle is about to begin, right? I can't wait to see how everything will turn out! Awesome work!

Haha~ great chapter as usual! I really liked how you portrayed Hera, especially on her relationship with Zeus. I think that anyone would feel that way if they had Zeus for a husband... :D Looking forward to more!

Hey! Thanks for the update! So, this story will end soon? Congratulations to you then!! Hope you'll make more MayuraxLoki fics..
I wonder what will happen next.. Update again, okay? Hehhehehe...

I really like your story! I like that you made Mayura a detective and a goddess. It's cool that way. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.