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Reviews For: Breaking Through the Haze - Reviews: Page 1 of 9

star-dreamer09
2008-07-09
ch 36,
abuseThat was such a good ending for the story! I loved every minute of it and I can't wait to read the sequal.. I know it'll be good, you wouldn't let me down :0)! Great Job
*Star
protejerinnocencia
2008-06-11
ch 36,
abuseaww I did a good job. Haha yay me! Ok will stop being a dork.
Celeron Red
2008-05-01
ch 35,
abusegreat chapter, i liked it. Good job!
protejerinnocencia
2008-05-01
ch 35,
abuseYay for invisiportals!! I so want to help with the next chapter...??
Celeron Red
2008-04-29
ch 34,
abuseGreat chapter! that scene with ashley was very nice, update soon!
star-dreamer09
2008-04-29
ch 34,
abuseNice little scene with Andros and Ashley...but I'm quite interested to find out what the three little marks on his back are...hm... Great Job!
*Star
protejerinnocencia
2008-04-29
ch 34,
abuseWhat are the marks on his back? Glad you got to finish the chapter last night.
star-dreamer09
2008-04-25
ch 33,
abuseAt least their all friends again...that's a good thing. This was a good chapter...I can't wait to see what happens next!
*Star
Celeron Red
2008-04-24
ch 33,
abuseVery good chapter
protejerinnocencia
2008-04-24
ch 33,
abuseAw i thought you were going to go for the big grab with this one. Maybe next chapter. if you need help with it, let me know.
star-dreamer09
2008-04-23
ch 32,
abuseDo i sense some foreshadowing...or atleast a hoax of some foreshadowing :0) Great chapter, I'm glad Karone can relate to her brother and vise versa!
*Star
Celeron Red
2008-04-18
ch 32,
abuseGreat chapter!. LOVED IT!
protejerinnocencia
2008-04-18
ch 32,
abuseat least Karone understood. I just love making Andros all angsty and torn. It's such good fun!
star-dreamer09
2008-04-10
ch 31,
abuseI'm glad the're not "fighting" anymore... Please update soon because this story always makes me smile! :0)
*Star
Celeron Red
2008-04-10
ch 31,
abuseH! great job with the chapter, please update soon however i will be gone because i am ill so i think i won't be able to post reviews soon. But ill do it .
Take care!
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