You are quite good, but you could so much better when it comes to characterizing. I noticed throughout your writing that you don't seem to give it your all on the characters; it's just hard seeing the difference between them sometimes. They also lack their little details, like tone. But you do write well, in terms of grammar.

Very nicely done, I enjoyed it! I thought it was cute. XD

You know, that's actually very like Atticus...he's unique and open-minded. :) I really liked the characters in this fic...and the way that you showed everyone has a good side. Really nice fic! -

that was great, really great. i may not sound it, but i'm really laughing my head off.

Lolz. Hilarious. All i can say is SACRE BLU! Which is like french for Omg. This was a funn fic lol. Hooray for Fubuki! XD.

XD That was a good one. I wasn't expecting that Fubuki spoke French, I just thought he was so dumb that he and Napoleon got along great. You know, birds of a feather, flock together?

*giggles* Fubuki, once again, shows why he is the most awesome of the awesome!